So Automatisch, Du Bist Wie'ne Maschine - Comments

I'm a bad contest runner because I got swamped and never got to your entry but I'm here now. I only read the first chapter because I don't have time to finish it up, but I like your start. I don't have much to pick at besides your quotes, but it's all a preference thing, I guess. Nice job(:

Sorry, but Bill in a cardboard box?
I would piss myself and then take him home and-NEVERMIND!

Anywhos, subscribed. (:

I liked how the beginning began of the story, and you truely showed Bill's depression. I did like your old layout better, even though the dark font color didn't contrast well with the dark background, but this one is good too. :)

Lol.
You wanted me to talk MORE about Bill just sitting there walling in his own self pity?
Stinking and staring blankly at the wall?
Not eating or drinking?
ON THE BRINK OF DEATH?!!

I think not.

CARPETTTT
WOOP!
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YOU HAVE THE PLAN IN YOUR HEAD?
HE'D RUN YOU OVER..
MWHAHAHA
I'M NOT LISTENING TO YOU...
IF YOU HAVEN'T NOTICED...

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YEAHH...
BACK TO THE SNOW STORYY...

WAIT!
GOOD CHAPTER...
BIT SHORT...
xD

I'm hacking you.
While you're sat next to me.
Ha. Ha. Ha.

Ohs wows. I like it :)
I decided since I was on here, I may as well read something...
This was worth the stay ^.^

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I don't think the carpet was very funny.
I've got Bill's lounge all planned out and designed in my head.
That's the BEST bit about this story.
Imagining what Bill's house would be like if I designed it.
He'd love it duh... XD

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Oh no! I forgot to come backk! =[[
Haha... The more times I comment... The more times you have to look attt...
...
<<<
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Anywayy...
Funny Bit... Didn't find very funny...
The carpet was funnier... xD
And noww...
I shall go!
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You didn't come back from your 'Brb' XD
Fool.

xx

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Umm...
Well I was reading itt... Then is disappeared... =[[
I spotted a mistakee!
Like you always do to minee! =]]
I'm in a talkative mood tonighttt, it's funn
I might just stay here any waffle... But then that may annoy youu...
Hmmm...
Have you added the funny bit yett?
Nope? Ok... So I can't read it yet? Nopee....
I'll comment on what I read... Which was all the chapter... without the missing bitt... xD
Poor carpet!... It was a carpet wasn't it? O.o...
I can't go back and checckk!
Because the chapters goneeeeeee =[[
Ohhh! It's back nowww? Ok!
I'll go read itt! =]] Brb

XD

Sarah... that wasn't supposed to be funny. Lol.
But thank you for reading it!!

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Helloooo!! =]]
Pfft, and you say I never read any of your stories...
:L
You know... I'd love to see Bill just sitting in a cardboard box on the street...
Could be quite funny... xD

Oh I like this x)
I really do :D