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  • Lunar

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    the first one was a bit confusing, but in the end I got it. It was very sweet :)
    January 3rd, 2010 at 01:30am
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    I like it. I got a bit confused in between the lyrics because I couldn't tell when the lyrics started and when the people talked. But I liked it.
    December 29th, 2009 at 02:43am
  • Bumblebee Brie

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    I love chapter four's song. And I'm so glad he's getting therapy. The mofo ACTUALLY hither- Qe should mass together and go snipe him.
    ;D
    December 29th, 2009 at 02:24am
  • melinda 666

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    plot is cute.
    try proofreading some more; it'll help with spelling and you'll catch a lot of grammar mistakes.
    December 28th, 2009 at 07:08pm
  • Jes.

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    that's really good. :) i like itt.
    December 28th, 2009 at 07:07pm
  • Bumblebee Brie

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    Aw that's so sweet chapter 3 go blood transfusions and AWWWW poor Monroe.
    December 28th, 2009 at 03:16am
  • Bumblebee Brie

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    I loved chapter two. Haha, Taylor you shithead. THAT"S WHAT YOU GET BITCH!!
    <333
    December 27th, 2009 at 01:43am
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