Frankie - Comments

"He's a really nice guy, and mom, he's so cute," Francesca gushed, a wide smile spread across her face.
Frankie is too cute, she's naive when it comes to anything boy related it seems but, talking to her mom about it was sweet since she can confide in her mom.
And Jordan, smooth "it only took her pushing me away to realize I like her". But, I guess he can redeem himself by driving out to Annapolis to rightfully apologize and tell Frankie his feelings. I just hope that she doesn't push him away because she thinks he's lying.
Loved it, Frankie is sweet.

lovelovelove :) <3 more updates please? :D

There is such a sweetness about this story that really hits me. I hope you update soon!

Awww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I knew he was going to confess sooner or later!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! Love it, love it, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :) :) :D :D :D:P :P :P

"it only took Frankie telling me that she never wanted to see me again to realize it!"
lololol he is a mental twat! please update soon, this is too good :')

yeah.thank you for updating. I will just keep my mouth shut this time and let you update next whenever you like. good chapter though, and I can't wait for the next!

AH! Im so glad hes coming to his senses ha. Update soon :)

And the plot thickens! Aside from a few grammar and spelling errors this was pretty flawless. I hope you update soon!

AH! This is such a good story! Different than alot of the others. I like it! Cant wait to read the next chapter!

huh. well I don't know how i liked the end of that chapter. seems like frankie had a big personality change to confront jordan like that. plus a few spelling errors but over all I am just glad you updated. thanks!

what an idiot!! someone stab him in the face!!! D< FFFFFFUUUUUUUUUU!!!!

I'm glad that Frankie gave him a good talking to.

Psh, this just enforces the fact that Marc is the better Staal. What an m-azing man to stand up for someone that he's only just met. He knew Jordan was in the wrong and treating his "girlfriend" as if she didn't even deserve his attention. Jordan really did deserve to get checked by Kennedy and Talbot. If only they had gone out to dinner before the game, I'm sure Marc would have checked Jordan good.

Yes, Frankie has a spine. I'm glad she told Jordan that he would have known that she was going to be away for the weekend if he had been paying attention to her at dinner. But, Jordan being a distraction to Frankie means there is something about him that intrigues her and keeps him around in her mind. Really liking Frankie's character she's changing and being more confident with herself around Jordan at least.

If she is distracted that means she likes him!
If he wasn't such a manwhore! :)
More soon!

Awwwww, poor Jordan, but he screwed up. Loved the update ;) :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) :D :P

first!

Still wondering how this will play out.
I like how cold Frankie can get.

I can't help but draw similarities between this story and of my own. Which only adds to the realism and only pulls me deeper into the lives of the characters.

I wonder what will happen in Annapolis?

I admit it: I cheered a little for Frankie at the end.

But I'm kind of wondering when the spark will happen. They don't seem to have any romantic attachment to each other at all. Of course, I'm not the one writing the story :P

Nice chapter though :)

:P you need an editor.
It was cute. I could honestly relate with Frankie, loving someone in vain, knowing full well nothing well ever happen. And then finding someone who she is the exact opposite to her and still end up getting hurt.
The characters were surreal. To me, they blended with their world. They were believable and you make it seemingly plausible to meet Frankie turning down nerds in the library and eating ice cream from the package while watching Star Trek.
But as cute as the plot is and how realistic the characters are, the story still lacks passion. It needs you to feed the spark between Frankie and Jordan and really light this story up.
I sincerely hope your next update speeds up the story, Its moving, but its not moving on its own.
>_< I know how hard it is to write a passionate story when your main character lacks passion.
But the ever pushy Jordan Staal just might break the shell around Frankie and draw her heart out.

I'll be watching this story carefully, because it is relevant to my interests.

No ratings for now.... but i'm really excited to see how much of your own passion will show itself in the story. It has lots of potential to be heartbreakingly awesome.

This is such a cute story. I love the contrast between Frankie and Jordan. I hope you update soon!

Bahahahaha. Oh my goodness the whole lap incident has totally happened to me before and it wasn't even a boyfriend it was a guyfriend which makes it ten times more awkward. :)

Keep updating because I've been waiting for this story. :) <3