Frankie - Comments

I love it! UPDATE SOON!

Love love love!!!!!!!

I liked this update, I mean not in a morbid way but because I think it shows just how much Frankie and Jordan's relationship has developed.

Having Frankie talk so openly to Jordan about her family's problems and her own traumatic experience tells us just how much she has grown to trust Jordan.

It's nice to see Jordan in such a supportive role for her.

I love the newest chapter! You're an absolutely amazing writer and I cant wait to read chapter 19! :)

yeah! go blackhawks!
and thanks for the update. its good that jordan learned that about her.
I was a little worried when you didn't update this for like 13 days.
can't wait for the next chapter!!

Awwww, that's so sad :( I'm so glad Jordy's such a sweetie-pie :) I love this ;) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P: P And woot woot!!!!!!! the Hawks won!!!!!!!!!! 2 more games!!!!!!!! yay ;) D: :P

I'm curious now as to what Frankie's past is if she mentioned not being able to walk due to something Drew did to her in the past.

Also makes you wonder how long Drew has had an alcohol problem since both Frankie and Gwen knew of it and just how much of a problem drinking is for Drew.

Hopefully, Frankie will be able to tell Jordan about her past and why she's so disappointed in her brother. At least Jordan did know to show up at the station for Frankie.

Oh my gosh, some secrets are soon to be revealed!!!!!! Ahh :) I love this :) And Jordan....ahh, no words can describe him enough in this story :) I love him :) :) :) :D : D :D:P :P :P

AHHHH damn girl, I cant wait for next chapter to see what happens!!! This story is absolutely amazing! :)

Drama, nothing makes a story better than drama. I can't wait to see it unfold, I hope you update soon!

ahhh Andrew is a cunt, get your head straight man!! totally deserved that night in jail D:

Loved it.

uh o drew
when will Jordan find out about frankie's past and what will happen about that cause it sounds dramatic

I think it's sweet that Jordan does like the idea of simply being around Frankie and that he did keep his word and just played video games while allowing Frankie to finish her paper.
Jordan genuinely seems to want things to work between him and Frankie.
I wonder what's going to happen between Gwen and Drew I did think that they would be good together. I like that Jordan is so quick to want to help Frankie pick up Gwen. Not only are he and Frankie both friends with Gwen but, he wants to help her also because she means so much to Frankie.

It is soooooo freaking hard to find a good J Staal story on here, but darling, you have one of the best stories I've read on here period. Love Frankie, she reminds me of my little sister lol. Anywho, totally awesome story, but now I am addicted and I NEED an update. Like now... *subscribes*

Interesting twist with Gwen and Drew, you really know how to draw the reader in with the plot and the characters. Can't wait for the next chapter!

uh oh. what going on with drew??
yeah it is good to see a new side of jordan and frankie, I hope we get to see more of the cuddly side in the next chapters.
great update and more soon please!!

Aww jordan is really cute :D i was expecting him to piss her off haha, ho well it's better that way :)
Fuuu Drew! get it together man, but i actually like him with gwen : D

I love the story, especially this update, can't wait to see what happens with Gwen and Drew

Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!! They are just so precious together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it ;) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P