March 29th, 2010 at 01:56am
Wow. Well, kill one, kill all.
Creativity - 5. I can't get over the fact of the chestful of bullets!!
Grammar - 5. I couldn't spot any, but I am sure there would have been a few. I didn't stop and think "WTF?" so you are fine.
Content Knowledge - 5. Someone mentioned starboard! My daddy is a fisherman, so congrats to that person.
Organisation - 3. This is where your team fell down. I feel like poor ending person had to do the dirty work. She/he had to wrap up the story (chest full of bullets), but her/his chapter was so much longer than the rest. And all the twist seemed to happen in the end.
Over all, you got 17/20.
Goodluck!
All of you did a lovely job <3