It wasn't as bad as you're making it out to be - the chapter wasn't. I'm still reading (even if I don't comment after every update xP) So...I really don't have any suggestions. I liked James, and now I like Skylar, but then again I still like the arsehole we call James and...y'know? So it's the advice of everyone ELSE that you should look at for suggestions and stuff, because I don't know what I want...haha. =3 Until next update!
I want the ending to be something dramatic:] Maybe along the lines of Kevin giving up after one final, awesome, epic prank from the bottom of the gang's hearts to his sorry ass:D I loved how she reversed back into Lizzy rather than the guysXD truely epic
Ahhhh. Creepy. Kevin is a yuck. And so is Scorpius... You don't listen in on private late night phone conversations! It's just not done! Anyways... UPDATE!
Okay, I realize that it took me ofrever to read and comment. But this is only because my subscription did not inform me that you had posted a new chapter! I apologize fully for this show of disloyalty. xD But seriously. ♥ the new chapter.
I leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrve eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!!!! I shall subscribe and would like more updates!!!! :D btw I thought his name was Kevin....