October 5th, 2007 at 09:44am
omygod
that was amazing.
people tend to make their relationship really wild and crazy and filled with sex, so it's great that your mind wondered about how Mike and Billie, how they may not be exactly perfect.
And the way you compared their eyes, and their souls for lack of a better word, to the earth and how it all just belongs.
It's something I've never thought of before and now whenever I see their eyes, I'm sure my mind will go back to this idea.
This was SO amazing and I'm glad Ash told me about it.
I don't get around on Mibba very often, and this makes me happy that you're part of the select few who can actually write on this site.
I loved it!
The beginning was perfect and the ending blew me away, eveyrthing felt so tender, the smallest detail was made to seem so significant and I loved it,
Beautiful, it reallyw as my dear, well done.