I liked how her brother sort of ‘bribed’ her with waffles and juice. (Not to mention, it’s yummy(:
There were a lot of errors. And your paragraphs should have been spaced out(double spaced for stories on mibba, I think) I think there could have been more detail put into it but I’m just a picky person (As you know)
I liked how her brother sort of ‘bribed’ her with waffles and juice. (Not to mention, it’s yummy(:
There were a lot of errors. And your paragraphs should have been spaced out(double spaced for stories on mibba, I think) I think there could have been more detail put into it but I’m just a picky person (As you know)