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  • baysway

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    LOVED this update!!! I am with Frank - I hope Gerard takes care of him. ;) I am really, really enjoying this story. I love how Frank is so sweet and naive. Gerard needs to corrupt. And soon. Can't wait for more.
    June 28th, 2010 at 07:41am
  • Castiean

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    whoa mikey is older then gerard? o.o
    May 19th, 2010 at 12:45pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    -Squeals-
    D'awhhhh<33333333
    May 18th, 2010 at 11:44pm
  • Castiean

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    oh my god this is amazing,like its different from other frerards ive read
    i want more,please update soon
    May 18th, 2010 at 12:57pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Ngfhjakjfdldk....
    -Runs Around Screaming-
    OHMYGOSH.
    They like each otherrrr<3333333
    MOAR<3
    xo
    May 5th, 2010 at 02:59am
  • baysway

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    I would be hurt if Gerard did not want anyone to know that we were fooling around. Frank should say something to that effect. Loved the update!
    May 4th, 2010 at 06:05am
  • Out There

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    Good chappy there :D

    Kind of a twist there too :) I think, at the moment at least, Frank is attracted to the idea of having someone like him and be affectionate rather than being attracted to Gerard.

    I like the character you're developing for Gerard a lot more in this chapter. It's like he's suddenly turned into this badass tease who gets whatever he wants (something I wouldn't have guessed until now) XD And 'cause of this it makes such a weird relationship between the two, like we know that, no matter how Frank feels about it, they will end up together, in whatever way Gerard would like.

    Did you change the layout? I think I prefered the old one, maybe just because I thought the picture suited it perfectly =/ :D
    April 13th, 2010 at 03:08pm
  • always infinite

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    I love it!
    Gerard is a whore though, but who can resist him even so?
    Your writing is great!
    April 12th, 2010 at 11:38pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    -Giggles-
    Honestly, that was pretty hot.
    >:D
    But anyways.
    NO. Gerard isn't a whore.
    Well....even if he was, he's a pretty whore.
    xP
    More?<3333333
    xo
    April 12th, 2010 at 10:42pm
  • I.Got.No.Wit

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    AHHH! I love it pleasepleaseplease update. I WANT MORE :D
    April 12th, 2010 at 06:18pm
  • baysway

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    Delicious. I would call him more of a tease than a whore. But I love him either way. ;)
    April 12th, 2010 at 05:59am
  • poisonedpills

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    ha! i like gerard the whore! lol
    April 12th, 2010 at 05:25am
  • Out There

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    I love this :) The atmosphere that you've made in the whole drama group thing is awesome, and how they had their own party and realistically, they probably aren't very cool at all to the rest of the school, but Frank really wants to fit in with them and to him they are cool.

    By the way, how old is Frank and Gerard in this? I'm from England and don't understand that school system :S I guessed 14/15?
    March 30th, 2010 at 05:54pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Awhhhhh, Frankie(:
    It's okay.
    Of course he's not messing with you silly,
    cause you're an awfully attractive freshy.
    >:D
    Anywho.
    Besides, I personally sure as hell wouldn't mind if my first kiss was stolen by Gerard Way. ;D
    More?<3
    xo
    March 29th, 2010 at 11:03pm
  • Eugene.

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    Poor Frankie. Confused and what not.
    But I believe that both you and Gerard have bigger plans for him, eh?
    Hah
    March 29th, 2010 at 04:42am
  • Eugene.

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    Hrmm.
    I'm interested...
    I can't wait to see where you take this...
    March 20th, 2010 at 03:20am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Haiiiiii<3
    New reader here,
    and new reader LUBBS your story.
    It's BRILLIANT.
    :)
    More soon?<3
    xo
    -Subscribes-
    March 9th, 2010 at 10:46pm
  • figwmwrtbb

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    Gee creeped me out a little in this chapter but I still loved it :)
    aw man am I the only one who hasn't had their first kiss yet? :(
    update soon?
    March 8th, 2010 at 06:44am
  • RedPaw

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    OMGOMGOMG?
    Is He A twilight Vampire? Because you are gonna die a veerrryyy painful death if he is.
    March 7th, 2010 at 08:23pm
  • Pencey Prep

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    amazing amazing amazing!
    this is completely and utterly cute.
    March 7th, 2010 at 06:42pm