My Parents Adopted the Hot, Conceited, Hot, Jerk, Hot, Asshole of My School. Did I Mention He's Hot?! - Comments

  • NoYouShutUp

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    loved, loved, LOVED the way you ended it <3 !! When you said that the next chapter was going to be the last I wasn't quite sure how you would be able to end it from there but you amazed me by the way you did!!
    Very good story, cried at a couple parts :) Keep up writing, you do a great job.
    Some advice though: maybe try putting more emotion and description into the details throughout your stories. :) Just some advice to take into consideration, don't need to use it though if you don't want to :)
    Again, FANTASTIC STORY!!
    September 27th, 2010 at 08:23am
  • JellyPiner

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    OMG I CRIED ON THE LAST CHAPTER..I HAVE BEEN FEELING DOWN LATEY AND READING THIS SERIOUSLY MADE ME THINK AND ITS SOOO SAD BUT I LOVED IT. i thought i was going to hate the ending, but actually im glad u ended it like that. it was amazingly heart warming and incredible! i am SOOO happy u made a story like this, with a real meaning and lesson in the end.
    July 26th, 2010 at 05:21am
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    July 5th, 2010 at 10:11pm
  • JustACupcakeLover

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    I liked the ending and i can't wait to read more of your stories. =)
    January 22nd, 2010 at 06:53pm
  • Who me? Couldn't be!

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    Hm...at first I was upset when you said the next may be the last. But then I thought about it and decided as long as it's a happy ending, it doesn't really matter. So yeah, great update. Looking forward to more...maybe the last.
    January 19th, 2010 at 10:08pm
  • a venom

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    wonder what's going to happen next
    January 19th, 2010 at 08:31pm
  • a venom

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    can't wait for the next one
    January 18th, 2010 at 07:22am
  • JustACupcakeLover

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    Awww... ='( Poor Juliana...
    January 13th, 2010 at 12:04pm
  • a venom

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    more soon?
    January 13th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • a venom

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    that is sad
    more soon?
    January 13th, 2010 at 01:56am
  • lisztomania

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    Oh, no not good. I cant wait till the next chapter
    January 13th, 2010 at 12:40am
  • Don't.Tempt.Me

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    no dont delete it this story is too cute!!
    January 6th, 2010 at 04:57pm
  • Airheart.101

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    shes smart:) cool headed, hot hearted.
    January 6th, 2010 at 01:30pm
  • a venom

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    more soon?
    January 6th, 2010 at 03:12am
  • Airheart.101

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    NONONO FUCKING HELL OF A NO! I DON'T WANNA HAVE TO STALK YOU TO SEE WHEN YOU'LL REPOST THE STORY!!! ITS FUCKING GREAT ALREADY!!! SHEESH
    January 4th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • AllBecauseofYou

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    NO!!! If you want I will go through it and fix everysingle mistake for you. plz plz plz don't stop writing it. leave a comment on my profile if you will allow me to fix the story. My name is Mayzy and I love your story because of the twists and turns and the suprises that i never expect that occur in every chapter! plz allow me to fix all the mistakes and profread future chapters. plz leave me a coment I am very good with grammer and spelling even if i don't show it
    January 4th, 2010 at 12:28am
  • Mrs.Captian Morgan

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    sry someone reported u it sucks ur deleting the story but i'm sure ur next story will be just as alsome if not better
    January 3rd, 2010 at 10:21pm
  • Who me? Couldn't be!

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    Are you kidding?! Yours is one of the BETTER ones on here! I've read stories that are like...
    "and then he wuz srry cuas he didnt no nething bout her and it waz really bad"
    That's just ridiculus. I'm terribly upset.
    January 3rd, 2010 at 10:20pm
  • a venom

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    that really blows.
    i hate when people do that when they report
    January 3rd, 2010 at 09:13pm
  • JustACupcakeLover

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    This is an awesome story. You can imagine everything when you read it. Love it. Update pleassee :)
    January 3rd, 2010 at 08:55pm