I guess this story is about two or three years old but I am reading Coffee Shop and Marble House and I am really enjoying them so I read a couple of your other stories as well and I really love your writing style! I'm only on chapter 13 of this one and I felt like I should comment. But yeah, awesome.
I really liked reading this. It was an awesome idea to have Gerard being afraid of the water. I liked how you motioned Mikey coming back from swimming lessons one day when he was younger and swimming on the kitchen floor. I love doing that.
OMG OMG this story is like one of the best ive read it is so original so amazing why did you end it ="[ you seriously should do a sequal to it!! im fucking serious!
It's over :[ I guess it's bittersweet in a way. I loved it. Really was an amazing story; I was always excited when I saw that you updated. Keep writing!!