February 7th, 2010 at 12:23am
One Shot for a One Shot
I love Sci-Fi, and you grasp the whole concept perfectly!
I love how they were on a different planet. It seems so much like Earth, so I love that!
The detail was superb and perfect and the grammer had no flaws.
Keep up the good work!
I didn’t understand any of it but, there again, I’m really bad at anything to do with Science
Like I’ve been saying, you should create your own layouts :)