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shes more siren then she thought isnt she?

I read this entire story in on sitting. I love it so much. You said that you were going to take some time away from it but this definitely feels like there should be a sequel. I mean, what did the writing say? What did that serum actually do? What is she now?

Dude, this is seriously my favorite Jacob Black story. I couldn't even guess what the plot was in the beginning, which I love. I like how unique your story is and it leaves me craving more!

I just finished it...and so far it's my favorite Jacob Black story. It's so original, different from anything I've ever read and I loved it. My favorite person I think was Atticus.

Please, do write a sequel. It would break many people's hearts to not continue to read this wonderful writing (:

So I have to say that I just started and finished reading this story in one sitting....and though time consuming, I'm happy I did, because I enjoyed this so much. It really was an amazing read...and I got really into the characters as if I knew them personally. And I've been wanting to say this after chapter he popped up in, but Paul is such an ass. Truly. I don't know if you can understand how much I wanted to slap him throughout this,

But back to the story...the plot was just marvelous. I was literally on my toes as much as Jacob wanting to know just what the heck was wrong with Colby, would she survive, and could Carlisle find a cure. And just the way you portrayed every character's emotions in a way that was so very realistic. Especially the conversation in which flowed between our main character's. I am wondering why Seth or even Colby never told Jacob that she had changed her mind about him...because i felt like she should've deserved some credit at least for that. But I thought it was perfect with her not knowing about Bella and Kim spilling the beans...And might I say...Cammie, ugh....I was so waiting for Jacob to finally go off on her or something while he was in that second rut for talking about Colby. I wanted to deck her as well. You can imagine how much I actually cheered when Colby did a number on her nose. I was ecstatic, I tell you!

And Atticus....Probably my favorite character. Just the way you portrayed him, and how he was acted with Colby was beautiful. And the way you seemed to write him in such depth without ever actually giving any concrete details about him personally was great. Though, I do wish I could have understood more about his and Colby's father's relationship, or maybe have been given a bit more of an understanding on why Attie is the way he is.

Another thing, and please don't take this the wrong way, because this story was beautiful, but this story, as we grew closer to the end, and especially in the last few chapters...seemed a bit rushed, and unfinished. And I'm not sure if that was meant to be so, leaving the rest to our imaginations, but I was a little disappointed I never got to find out just what her father was hiding from her, or what her mother had meant by what she told her...Was she never meant to die...was this just something she was growing into as she came closer to being eighteen, and turning into a woman? And what did the script say? And why was it there now? It all means something, I'm sure, but I guess that's something I'll have to leave up to my imagination and fill in myself.

But regardless...Terrific job....You are an amazing writer, and I hope you continue with it!

Thanks for writing this story....its now one of my favorites (:

So, I loved this story so much, I Googled all the lyrics you used as chapter titles. (Which is slightly creepy, I know.) I found almost all of the songs, except for the title of chapter 44: Drop this façade, this is not who you are. What song is that?

This really was such a good story, one of my favorite's one this site.

I still cling to the hope that there'll be a sequel :)

awww ,
i really liked this<3
ive been sitting here forever ,
just statred with the first chapter and wanting to finish it all !
i love the basic story , its really unique .

i actually just posted the first chapter in my
own jacob story , it would be awesome
if you could read mine and tell me what you think:P

To be brutally honest, and as much as i hate to say it, probably not. i figure i owe you the truth, and for some reason i just cant find motivation to come back to these characters... maybe someday i'll find the motivation because i do still have the ideas buzzing around my head, but i'm taking time to work on something completely different for a while. hopefully i'll have something to put out soon... writing comes hard to me these days

sequel?
:)

This story, is amazing. You have NO idea how much I dore and love it!
It's great!
:D

This is one of my all time favorite mibba stories sincerly amazing

update

I'm just gonna keep saying "SEQUEL!!!!!" and hope that my plea is heard :)

Lol it was short cuz she died.
:p
cc:
<3

oh my gosh! I'm dying here, you have to update again soon :]

no Jake will save her with his heat!!! no !!!

Please post another chapter. I'm seriously so antsy right now lol.

SO INTENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T STOP NOW!!!! *WHINES*