I Want to Make You Feel Beautiful - Comments

This was rather interesting. In a good way.

I really appreciate that you went back and forth between the flashbacks and the present time stuff. I can't remember the exact word. But, that was a really good idea. I've never read anything like this before.

I still kinda want to know exactly what was written on the paper.. although I do have a general idea.

Good job.

i love the way that the two time periods inter mix,
well written

I love it. I love thedescription and I love how they met. I like how you described the sex and the orgasms. It was really good. Its one of the best one shots I've read. The layout fit the story perfectly.

this was amazing.
i love one shots for the mere fact that you get the whole story so quickly.
you are so talented and you write amazingly.

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I'm kind of a sucker for description, so of course I liked this story for that. But I think what got me most was the...the sweetness of this one shot. A lot of stories lack that sort of heart-warming giddiness received by slow passion, but yours definitely does not.

Great job. Very beautiful.

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Wow. That was amazing, Krysta.

I've never read anything like it.

Wow, just... blew my mind...

Beautiful.

Aw I like that.
Its so cute, even if it has sex in it, Its still cute

~Gee

This put a huge smile on my face :D
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that was amazing. i love how this is well writtened. beautiful :D

Aww! How beautiful! You've done it again. I absolutely adore your stories.

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AWE!!!!!!!!!

woah! major fluffy-ness at the end there! awww i loved loved loved it!!!! so cute!

hehe, it was cute!!! very well written, nice pace, great descriptin, I loved it!!xoxo

Whoa! This is awesome. No, amazing. Nooooo, beautiful. It really really was. Very well written. Kudos for this awesome chapter!

aww that was HOT and cute at the same time, loved it :]]
xxx