Love Spell - Comments

I'm going to give you my entire opinion.

There's a great deal of descriptive writing, and I love that. The narrative part, however, I do not. It seems a little unrealistic, the way Edwin is. His character is flat- he turned into a puppy after the first chapter. And I'm not entirely sure about Serena either. Sorry...^^'

As I said, though, your descriptive writing is great. The emotions of that last chapter really stood out.

thank you so much Jade! :) I'm so happy you liked it. You and tay always help me sum up my thoughts on paper. Thanks for motivating me to keep going! :)

i love it!! it was so detailed that it played like a little movie in my head!!! write more!!!

thank you so much Tay-tay! <3
Your comment was very much appreciated :)
love you!

Fifi, I was totally captured the moment i read the summary! I love how you alter the dictation to set the scene for an old England setting and how u use description to make everything come alive! Needless to say, the plot is excellent!! Keep at it! <3 <3 <3

Thanks Kate! <3 I appreciate all of your support!

Amazing! Dude, I love it(:
Hopefully I'll be able to keep up with it.
10/10? 10000/10! So update soon!
Love~ Kate

Thank you very much :)

This is very good! I'm excited to read more :D