Candy Camera - Comments

this is so different to your usual writing, brilliant as ever, but so short....

i'm not clear on what happened, but i know, like looking through water...... its left playing on my mind... i will be thinkinng of this story for a while....

It's amazing! I love the way you write. The way you emphasize the beards and buttocks. and it's not awfully long dreaded. and it's really good constructed, from chapter 1 to chapter 3 it was not too difficult to understand.overall, I loved it!

I just realized... It's actually finished. XD -is a doofus- It's about 1:35 am and I've been up for 24 hours so I didn't realize what was happening fully... But I loved it. Gah, even more mystery, because now my mind is going to be reeling over this for hours, wondering just what happened. I love your stories so much.

This one is short too! You're on a roll, and it makes me happy. Everything you're doing with your work is really new, and unlike you, which is quite amazing in my eyes. A change for every story is an amazing one, I say. When you create a new style of writing, that is when you start becoming an author. That is when you can create life, and that is precisely the gift you are recieving. I am so envious.

Sorry about the rambling... I tend to do that when I'm excited.... But this is such a scandal! You completely skipped over the part where they meet, and I am dying, wishing, wanting to know all that happened and my mind goes in so many ways! I wonder how awkward it is, what each man is thinking (besides Gerard, who is very obviously pleased). There's just so much left open, so much mystery, so much the reader has to connect for themselves that it's like a rollercoaster ride, and it all depends on the reader. I really love that.

:D Is all of this story going to be short? I am excited. I am ecstatic and I can hardly wait! Bob and Frank = wtf is going on, who is taking such sexy pictures of our buttocks and beards, and why? This is thrilling and exciting, as well as something I haven't ever seen on Mibba before in my entire life. Joyus joy, this path is to be wonderful, is it not?

Hah, I just finished chapter one. ^^ I like what you have going here, Bonnie. It was rather short and abrupt, and not what you usually do, yet it wasn't straight out to the point. I had to use my brain for a second to see what was going on and I love that! You paint a picture, but let people see it how they want... Your writing is a pure work of art. You bring beauty back into words. :)

And yes, I am going to comment on every chapter :)

Oh wow that was really good, it took me a minute in the first one to try to understand but the second chapter pieced it all together for me
I like the way you describe things to the point where the reader is curious enough to go to the next chapter but you never exactly come out and say what's going on :)