December 16th, 2009 at 08:00am
All authors say first chapters are iffy, but I actually like this one :D
As you said, it doesn't show her dark side yet, but I'm sure we'll see it as you progress (:
I like the first chapter for a few reasons.
I love your writing style, and how you word everything.
It doesn't go into paragraphs describing one small conversation,
it's casual :P
And I love the humor so far, haha.
I'm always a sucker for humor ;D
I think I'll love this story a lot soon (:
So...chapter two soon? <3
Like, she just gets Alex when she JUST reunited with Nick?
God, Alex doesn't even know...or does he?
The story's really picking up (:
Can't wait for more <3