Much Better - Comments

flywithme; (105)

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Hi everyone, apologies but I won't be extending this story. It was written as a one shot and will stay as a one shot, I think it's more effective that way :)

February 22nd, 2014 at 10:44am

Stacicakes (100)

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loved it!

January 17th, 2011 at 04:47pm

coolcat2003 (100)

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omg you should make it a big story or something it has so much behind it i love it it almost made my cry plz make it a bigger story

June 28th, 2010 at 10:05am

Yo-I Love-Joe (100)

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This is really good can't wait for the rest of the story.. :)

January 1st, 2010 at 07:01am

FlyWithMe;; (105)

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I loved this!
You have to make this into a story, it is really well written.

December 26th, 2009 at 03:45am

NICKnEMMA4ever (105)

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AWESOME STORY!!
I LOVE IT!!

YOU SHOULD TOTALLY MAKE IT INTO A STORY!!
IT WOULD BE COOL!!
I WOULD SUBSCRIBE TO IT!!

December 22nd, 2009 at 03:42am

My heart slows down; (100)

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That made me cry so bad! haha. I'm such a sap!
You should make it a two-shot with a happy ending :) lol
I really liked it though! So well written!

December 9th, 2009 at 07:35pm

maktastic (100)

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awesome one shot! has so much emotion and is written well :P

December 9th, 2009 at 12:34pm

RomanianLover (100)

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I would love to see this go further.
So many ideas are running through my head.
I really love it.
<3

December 9th, 2009 at 10:57am