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  • not mohawks; robots

    not mohawks; robots (100)

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    awwwwwwwhh.

    even if the[/n] date ended badly, it was still ahh-freakin-dorable.
    January 26th, 2010 at 02:33am
  • Logan Lerman

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    Aw that was sweet!
    Ivory actually trusts Jack enough to share her past :)
    update soon!
    <3
    January 25th, 2010 at 09:07pm
  • brokenarrow

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    aww its almost over???
    January 23rd, 2010 at 10:43pm
  • rainbow.veins;

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    I'm a fan of the present. They're sweet.
    hurry up and update, plz! :D
    January 20th, 2010 at 10:13pm
  • b a r a k i t t e n

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    i absolutely love this story! it's so cute, i don't wanna see it end! (:
    January 20th, 2010 at 01:33pm
  • itsoundscatchy!

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    “So, was it just me or did the graphics in that movie suck balls?” Jack made a disgusted face and Ivory laughed.
    thats a good way to break the awkward moment like that which is why jack is so amazing.
    but you make him amazing.
    January 20th, 2010 at 04:21am
  • paramore23

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    I really love this...i totally think that even this date was better then the "perfect date" cause you can really see how she was nervous and broken and how he really wants to save her! I totally love it...ud again??!?! i have strep....it will totally make me feel better!!!!!!!!!!
    January 20th, 2010 at 01:12am
  • rainbow.veins;

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    ahmahgahd , I love this.
    January 12th, 2010 at 03:10am
  • DontGet_It_InMyEye

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    I just fell in love with Jack all over again! haha...I love this so much!
    January 10th, 2010 at 04:43am
  • itsoundscatchy!

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    Ivory sighed and rested her chin in his palm as she closed her eyes. “Where would I be without you?” She opened her eyes again and found his adoring eyes lingering on her.

    “You’ll never have to find out, beautiful.” He whispered and pulled her closer to him as he leaned forward, pressing a gentle, caring kiss to her forehead. “Never,” he promised before letting her go and pulling the car back onto the road.

    that my dear author is the most ingenious line ever written.it broke my heart.its the sweetest thing a guy could ever say.
    January 10th, 2010 at 03:07am
  • paramore23

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    LOVE THIS STORY!!! your amazing!! ud soon!!! like asap!! hahaha
    January 10th, 2010 at 01:38am
  • not mohawks; robots

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    “I love you, Ivory Jenkins.” The words shocked her as he reached over and held her face in his hands lightly. “And I would never consider letting you go through that alone ever again. Believe me when I say, you outshine every last one of them.” He grinned and waited patiently for the smile to slowly creep onto her perfect lips.

    eehhhhh! jack, you amaze me with your adorableness.
    actually, i should say you amaze me with your amazingness by writing jack so fucking perfectly. hope that makes sense...lol :)
    January 9th, 2010 at 07:15pm
  • riddlemeadream

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    he's amazing
    :D
    January 9th, 2010 at 05:59pm
  • oldthoughtsleave

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    Jack is what every girl wants; perfect.
    January 9th, 2010 at 04:55am
  • Logan Lerman

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    Awww; their first date!
    This will be good haha
    I want to know what'll happen at the par-tayy.
    Her dad is a jerk Dx
    update soon?
    <3
    January 9th, 2010 at 01:29am
  • itsoundscatchy!

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    what a-strong family?i hope jack doesnt get eaten alive.that wouldnt be very nice.maybe he'll stand up for her?update soon?
    January 7th, 2010 at 03:39am
  • To never feel alone.

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    JACK! <3
    I love this story x 43565454.
    :]
    January 7th, 2010 at 01:25am
  • not mohawks; robots

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    “But now I get to be your boyfriend for the day,” Jack smirked and sneaked a kiss on her cheek before they entered the house.
    -ahhh! so fuckin' adorable.

    “Shhhh,” Jack maneuvered so they were both on their sides, “it’s sleepy time.”
    -:D:D:D:D:D jack is so sweeet.

    “Will you go out with me, tomorrow night?” He blurted the question and groaned inwardly. He’d planned this ahead of time so it’d come out smooth, but all of it left him when he looked into her crystal blue orbs
    -finally! now they need to freakin' kiss!

    amazing chapter, my dear. :)
    January 7th, 2010 at 01:13am
  • the time lady.

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    Yay! Updates!
    Thankies :D.

    Jack is such a sweetheart <3
    January 7th, 2010 at 01:12am
  • paramore23

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    AHH your the greatest!!! You really made my night hahah!! LOVE ITT thanks so much!! and i tots LOVED real monsters!! It was the greatest show on Nick!!! cant wait for the date ahhhhh!!! really cute
    January 6th, 2010 at 11:38pm