August 14th, 2010 at 05:45am
This Animal I've Become - Comments
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fantastic<3.August 7th, 2010 at 05:22am
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I LOVE IT! Update more please?August 2nd, 2010 at 09:29am
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Hey, I really like your story - it's really interesting, with all the twists and surprises ;). Just one point though - actually, two - grammar, you know? Sometimes the grammar and word order doesn't quite fit, but that's easily handable :). And also, try to break up the paragraphs a bit more, you know? Because sometimes it's a bit hard to concentrate on the text, if you get my drift :).
Otherwise: keep it coming! :)
Love, Haley
P.S. Would you check out my stories too? Me & Thee and Sugar & Spice - they're also Marauder-based. I'd love some feedback :).July 15th, 2010 at 01:04pm -
update update update sooooooooon plaseeeee i miss the updates(:July 10th, 2010 at 11:12pm
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This is great! I absolutely love this story, hillarious and stuff actually happens. Can't wait for the next update :]June 19th, 2010 at 09:12pm
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Woo! Loveeee it haha and of course I comment every chapter! I crave more hahaha I love Sirius so much he's hilarous!May 7th, 2010 at 10:06pm
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I just came across this and I loved it and I thought you should know. =3
I've always loved Remus stories from the Marauder days, and Sirius stories, but I never really read them anymore. I'm glad I broke my trend for this. xP
I'm gonna subscribe, and await the next update quite eagerly.May 7th, 2010 at 02:20am -
please update soonApril 21st, 2010 at 05:38am
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This story is beautifully written, I Love it. You spend time on the details, which not a lot of writers do.. although I did find that I could skip a paragraph or two, and still understand what was happening. I Really like the story though.April 19th, 2010 at 06:23am
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Yay an update!!!! I loveeee itMarch 27th, 2010 at 02:34pm
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its lovely and I'm glad that remus finally knows about her.March 27th, 2010 at 01:34am
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I really like this story.
It's amazingly written, and it turns out my suspicion was right.
Addie is a werewolf.
I can't wait to see what happens :]March 14th, 2010 at 09:59pm -
YAY and updateee lolMarch 14th, 2010 at 05:45am
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I Adore this Story <3March 3rd, 2010 at 02:20am
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Yay!!! I love the prank it's so creative I couldn't have thought of that lolFebruary 28th, 2010 at 12:59pm
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I love this so far! :)February 23rd, 2010 at 04:47pm
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Love the lengthFebruary 20th, 2010 at 06:22am
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So even though it's only been 6 chapters and it's still a little too early to really judge anything, this story is amazing. I like the tension and the mysterious air Addie has around her.
And okay, I sort of saw the whole Slytherin thing coming, but I was kind of hoping the boys would be a little more... Accepting. But what you did was brilliant and oh my God, I feel so horrible for Addie.
I'm sort of guessing that she's supposed to be the mediator between Slytherin and Gryffindor, but I might be reading too much into everything lol.
Ah, doesn't matter.
Update soon! I can't wait for moreeee. :]
<3February 16th, 2010 at 01:29pm -
but! the twist adds some yummy drama and I loveee drama lol good chapterFebruary 15th, 2010 at 05:18pm
That was great...
I can't wait for the next full moon...
I bet the Marauder's doesn't really like the idea of their friends fighting...
and ooo...
I love Sirius... He's great and awesome... =D
Update soon!