This Animal I've Become - Comments

  • xxblackxx

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    Awww...
    That was great...
    I can't wait for the next full moon...
    I bet the Marauder's doesn't really like the idea of their friends fighting...
    and ooo...
    I love Sirius... He's great and awesome... =D
    Update soon!
    August 14th, 2010 at 05:45am
  • mischiefmanaged.

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    fantastic<3.
    August 7th, 2010 at 05:22am
  • LovelySinner

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    I LOVE IT! Update more please?
    August 2nd, 2010 at 09:29am
  • Americana

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    Hey, I really like your story - it's really interesting, with all the twists and surprises ;). Just one point though - actually, two - grammar, you know? Sometimes the grammar and word order doesn't quite fit, but that's easily handable :). And also, try to break up the paragraphs a bit more, you know? Because sometimes it's a bit hard to concentrate on the text, if you get my drift :).

    Otherwise: keep it coming! :)

    Love, Haley

    P.S. Would you check out my stories too? Me & Thee and Sugar & Spice - they're also Marauder-based. I'd love some feedback :).
    July 15th, 2010 at 01:04pm
  • ivylyn

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    update update update sooooooooon plaseeeee i miss the updates(:
    July 10th, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • Vorazlov28

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    This is great! I absolutely love this story, hillarious and stuff actually happens. Can't wait for the next update :]
    June 19th, 2010 at 09:12pm
  • ivylyn

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    Woo! Loveeee it haha and of course I comment every chapter! I crave more hahaha I love Sirius so much he's hilarous!
    May 7th, 2010 at 10:06pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    I just came across this and I loved it and I thought you should know. =3
    I've always loved Remus stories from the Marauder days, and Sirius stories, but I never really read them anymore. I'm glad I broke my trend for this. xP
    I'm gonna subscribe, and await the next update quite eagerly.
    May 7th, 2010 at 02:20am
  • ivylyn

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    please update soon
    April 21st, 2010 at 05:38am
  • NeverXUnderstoodXIt

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    This story is beautifully written, I Love it. You spend time on the details, which not a lot of writers do.. although I did find that I could skip a paragraph or two, and still understand what was happening. I Really like the story though.
    April 19th, 2010 at 06:23am
  • ivylyn

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    Yay an update!!!! I loveeee it
    March 27th, 2010 at 02:34pm
  • hola

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    its lovely and I'm glad that remus finally knows about her.
    March 27th, 2010 at 01:34am
  • after all this time;

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    I really like this story.
    It's amazingly written, and it turns out my suspicion was right.
    Addie is a werewolf.
    I can't wait to see what happens :]
    March 14th, 2010 at 09:59pm
  • ivylyn

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    YAY and updateee lol
    March 14th, 2010 at 05:45am
  • Kayla Lynn

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    I Adore this Story <3
    March 3rd, 2010 at 02:20am
  • ivylyn

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    Yay!!! I love the prank it's so creative I couldn't have thought of that lol
    February 28th, 2010 at 12:59pm
  • Twelve Grimmauld

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    I love this so far! :)
    February 23rd, 2010 at 04:47pm
  • ivylyn

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    Love the length
    February 20th, 2010 at 06:22am
  • bomb diggity

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    So even though it's only been 6 chapters and it's still a little too early to really judge anything, this story is amazing. I like the tension and the mysterious air Addie has around her.
    And okay, I sort of saw the whole Slytherin thing coming, but I was kind of hoping the boys would be a little more... Accepting. But what you did was brilliant and oh my God, I feel so horrible for Addie.
    I'm sort of guessing that she's supposed to be the mediator between Slytherin and Gryffindor, but I might be reading too much into everything lol.

    Ah, doesn't matter.
    Update soon! I can't wait for moreeee. :]
    <3
    February 16th, 2010 at 01:29pm
  • ivylyn

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    but! the twist adds some yummy drama and I loveee drama lol good chapter
    February 15th, 2010 at 05:18pm