Wow! I realllllly like this! I reckon it has alot of potential! But yeah, don't rush it too much . =] Pretty awesome for your first Frerard! Ima subscribe ^_^
Update sooon!!!! <3333
Heh, and Whore!?!, I fucking love your avatar. It made me laugh so hard! XD
ay bay bay, i love it so far. im thinking about subsribing. :] jk jk you know im going to be your most loyal fan. i love you with everything i have and you know that i am here to stay. <3
You have a really, really great start. It's really well written, and has good grammar, I kill for good grammar lol I love, love, love it! <3 You should definitely update soon.
ooooooh frerard yes! this is starting out really good. i laughed so hard at the penis statement xD i figured when frank was saying she was a nice girl and all that he would say something like oh the fact she has a vagina or something and then i scrolled down and just about pissed myself. haha very nice well im definately subscribing just a suggestion, i think it would be good not to rush into the hook up, you know? like them getting together in the very next chapter would be quite soon and i find it great how it leads up to like the 'big moment' and they 'finally' get together because it keeps the readers in anticipation. so yeah just a suggestion =] and if its already prewritten or you dont want to change your ideas, i'll still totally read it. i really love any and all frerard so keep writing!!
This is a really great start! Don't stop writting it even if you only have a few readers. It took me like five chpters before I got more people to read and comment so don't give up hope. Congrats on your first Frerard! :D