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  • Lady Looch

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    She gave him a short "no" before pushing herself up from the snowy ice and walking away. She didn't give an explanation, she didn't even say sorry. She just left, carrying Jonathan’s heart with her.
    what. no way. who says no to JONATHAN TOEWS?!

    much dumber younger brother
    hahahaha!

    Instead he looked at her with his baby blues and said, "Thanks for the lo mien."
    OH. MY. GOD!!!!!!! WHAT A DICK!!!! damn, that guy gives douhe bag a whole new meaning

    wow. this was really great.
    I'm excited for more :D
    December 28th, 2009 at 02:22am
  • trigger;bang

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    Yay, you broke down and updated sooner than expected.
    and i'm stoked about it haha.
    more soon pleaseeee?
    December 26th, 2009 at 11:38pm
  • Jessica;

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    Okay, I'm hooked already.
    Both of their ex significant others are idiots.
    More soon. <3
    December 26th, 2009 at 08:13pm
  • roxy278

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    I can't wait for more! I love it already! =]
    December 26th, 2009 at 11:00am
  • Rylie_

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    Love it!!!! I'm hooked! Can't wait for more. And who wouldn't marry Tazer I mean look at him. He's adorable!
    December 26th, 2009 at 07:58am
  • into.the.rush

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    Loved ittt. :) and your new story? JARED STAAL OR MATT DUCHENE! Just a thought or two. :) Oh, and this is TOTAL serendipity. Same hometown? Same place now? :)
    December 26th, 2009 at 05:45am
  • xolovepensxo

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    ohh this sounds so good :D
    i can't wait to read more !
    obviously jonny's girfriend is like stupid because who wouldn't marry him!?
    December 26th, 2009 at 05:36am
  • trigger;bang

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    yessss, first comment.
    so excited for this!
    and the fact that you used a quote from invisible monsters?
    which is my favourite book! this is going to be so epic.
    update soon!
    December 10th, 2009 at 10:32pm
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