What Has Become Of Me? - Comments

Hahaha:] You're welcome *sweeps a bow* I can't wait to see who he is though:D

Awesome, I think your getting better as the story goes along.
This chapter was totally worth the wait! =)

I LOVE IT!!! haha i like the way this story is going :) and i think that the pound thing is EPIC!!! lol but i like ironic situations haha who is this guy?!?!?! i want to know!!! haha please update soon!!!!!!

Great update:D Why not use her super-dog powers to get away from the guy earlier?

In chapter 17, I pictured Seb with a " ^_^ " face. XD

Here are some names for the new guy:
Bryce
Wyatt
Cole
Gavin
Logan
Caden
Riley

If it helps you decide, I think that you should go with Riley or Wyatt.

This story is very funny and well put. I like the last update very much. The detail and mystery makes me want to read more. Please update again soon :) (not trying to push you into updating if the chapter is not ready)

Great update! i want to know who this shirt stealer is! and why can only Anika smell him?? I WANT TO KNOW! lolz, im high :P keep updating! XD

I'm thinking unusual, fluid and slightly... elaborate? You know, like some of those european names? Nikolas, Daemon, Gregori etc..? Go with your gut instinct^^

Awsome update! =)
Personaly I like the name Mason.

Hmm... you should name him Mysteriouso! lol, jk. Hmm... Zander? Dalton? Clayton? Nikolas? Daemon? Percy Jackson?<-lol, jk.

Loved the update!
Updates soon?

yay! you mentioned my story! XD thankies! haha anyway, the mystery guy seems odd, like a mystery lol! hehe he could collect spoons for a living? lolz "wanna see my collection of spoons?" nah jks, my mind is wrapped around...*thinks*...5 stories of my own at the moment...i really need to do things one at a time lol, anyway, can't wait to read more!!

=D
Great!
Can't wait untill the story really gets moving.
Mystery dude seems like the dark and mysterious type.

Hey Emm :3 Thanks for the story mention ^.^ I was actually working on the next chapter today XD I have an interesting idea for it. I honestly do love betaing this story, it's awesomee fun and even better with such a great author such as yooh. Loved the chapter and great cliff hanger at the end. I wanna know what happens in the next chapter!! What's the connection!? For the character builder, me thinks he should have ruffled black hair to compliment the eyes, reasonably tall and niice chest. Ooh with a good tan too, they're always niice =P Have fun wif writing that and I can't wait to read the final sculpturation of him.

Thanks for the mention of my story;) And amazing chapter by the way!
I think that what he looks like really depends on who he is on your story:)

IM BACK!!! woooh! i can comment again!! XD oh man that means i have to make up for the comments that could have ben posted!! how many chapters have been posted since i left? AHH! wait! i know! i'll open a new tab! (i am so smart :P) okay, chapter 18's comment:
wat could be so bad about picking movies? lol, well i know now so....damn i forgot what i was going to say.....eh, onto the next chapter! chapter 19's comment:
i don't know if it's any help now but Wanted is a good movie, i watched it once at Brooke's house. I'M EXCITED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS! oh wait...the game is over now...shuuuuuudup...(teehee, inside joke from Googa XD) you know by chapter 20 i was thinking that would be it, but there was another chapter! haha, picking movies sounds like a death sentence now. Well, apart from PLEASE KEEP UPDATING and great chapter/s i think that would make up for the comments you've missed out on...even if it doesn't it's better than nothing :P wow, it's taken me like ages to type all of this, mainly because i had to keep stopping to do stuff, but anyway, i'm sure you don't need a life story, yet you already have half of one here, i'm just gonna stop talking-no, typing-now.....great chapters!!

Yooh are an insane girlie Emm, but that's why I loves yooh :3 Thank yooh for using my correct spelling ^.^ ofcourse I noticed =P As for that goat, I severly hope it isn't reading this...it doesn't need any more ideas!! God help us all if it does try anything new *shakes head* Ooh! Guess what?? I'm cooking in home class tomorrow :D I'm just that awesomee >.< Ofcourse I will save yooh some...hopefully it will last long enough to get to yooh ;D I think yooh should include Chase doing some cooking in the next chapter ^.^

Ps. Would yooh like a cookie, muffin or a pancake?

HAHAHAxD Thanks PillowFort for the thing earlier^^ I completely forgot to thank ya till now;) YAAY!!! I'M A GENIUS!!! wow... My ego has gone up by around... er.. alot now..?xD
I don't have a 'perfect man' were or not... I think... At least my imagination - amazing though it is;D - cannot fully grasp the idea of someone being perfect. Wait. Actually it can grasp CLOSE to perfect!
Hot, intelligent, cares about me, is a decent guy under-neath whatever act he may or may not try to use.
Guys reading this? I can't tell... I don't think so... At least all the comments have only been from girls so far.
WOOOOO!! POTC AND MATRIX AND OTHER AWESOME MOVIES FTW!XD

Purrrs... nice... ;D

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH the pervertedness of the boys shall never get old. May I add, that, the sorta quote of Benny Hill was absolutely fantastic my dear ;D OVERALL IT WAS AWSOME! KRAZY LEMONSSSSSSSSSSSSS! AGAIN! MWAHAHAHHAHAHAHHA.

P.S We have to play twister next week!