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  • stephaniek

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    I love or story remind me of charmed mix with twilight nice
    April 17th, 2014 at 03:41am
  • bookreader89

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    I cryed at the end of the last chapter. The song she sang was really good too. She finaly said I love you. Took her long enothe!!
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:57pm
  • ItzMyLife101

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    OH MY CHEDDAR CHEESE!
    THIS STORY WAS AMAZING!
    I CRIED AT THE END!
    I IMAGINED JACOB BLACK AS TAYLOR LAUTNER (soooooo fine)
    I ACTUALLY HAD A DREAM THAT I WAS A WICA! I WISH I WAS ONE FOR REALS!
    LOVED THE STORY....
    AND NOW I LOVE MIBBA!
    IF U HAVE A TWITTER TELL ME SO WE CUD FOLLOW EACH OTHER CUZ UR GREATNESS NEEDS TO BE SHARED WITH THOSE LESS FORTUNATE!
    GOD BLESS
    ~ITZMYLIFE101~
    October 8th, 2010 at 02:12am
  • SimpleRoseSaysHello

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    Is there going to be a sequel? Great story! Ur a great writer!!!! Keep up the good work!!!! lol
    June 25th, 2010 at 10:52pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    I really love this story! Can't wait for the next update :)
    May 12th, 2010 at 11:51pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    This story is beyond awesome.
    I LOVE the new chapter!
    I can't wait for the next!!!
    April 23rd, 2010 at 07:24pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    cant wait for next chapter!!
    April 23rd, 2010 at 07:23pm
  • skinny love.

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    You are an amazing writer..
    But I think she should some how kill it so she can be with JAKE!
    COME ON! D:
    April 16th, 2010 at 01:30am
  • bookworm1516

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    MORE PLEASE!!!!
    April 13th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • choirgirlx3

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    wow! really cool!
    April 1st, 2010 at 11:07pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    This story keeps getting more confusing lol. But good chapter nonetheless! More soon?
    April 1st, 2010 at 10:06pm
  • XOXingridXOX

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    poor jacob:(
    April 1st, 2010 at 03:24am
  • sunnysummer

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    as much as i love ken's attitude, and appreciate how much damien loves her, i can't bring myself to support the decision for the kid to be born. this story is turning sadder and sadder
    April 1st, 2010 at 12:04am
  • solita

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    I LOVE the new chapter!
    I can't wait for the next!!!
    It's gonna be off the chain! :D
    [Please excuse the slang,b ut it wa the first thing that came to my head...]
    March 30th, 2010 at 05:12am
  • mlapineda

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    This story is beyond awesome. It's so different from all the other cliche twilight stories :D

    Please update soon & I hope that Ken gets her happily ever after (:
    March 29th, 2010 at 09:45am
  • XOXingridXOX

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    this is like phoebe in charmed i like it :)
    March 6th, 2010 at 05:29pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    Wow. That's messed up! She can't be pregnant with a demon baby!
    March 6th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • choirgirlx3

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    fantabulous update!!!!!
    March 4th, 2010 at 08:32am
  • sunnysummer

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    you CAN'T let ken have damien's kid! he's the worse fraud there is!
    March 4th, 2010 at 05:15am
  • choirgirlx3

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    wow is all i can say!
    March 4th, 2010 at 01:51am