Selective Regression. - Comments

  • imbalance

    imbalance (100)

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    That's amazing. It's short but it clearly expresses those feelings so well. Every single line was perfect.
    And I chase bunnies across the street and all my friends are younger and I don’t want to be a grown-up. I want to be Stargirl and Luna, perpetually curious and wonderful and able to see everything for it’s possibilities. ~ I love those lines. I don't know why, those words just seem to fit together beautifully.
    April 10th, 2011 at 08:08am
  • budgie

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    And I will chase bunnies with my children and help them look for fairies.

    I feel the same way. I feel old because I'll be twenty in two weeks, and I don't want to be. But I do. And that line that you wrote sums it up so perfectly.
    September 16th, 2010 at 10:54am
  • justeen28

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    This was beautifully written. And you did a fantastic job of getting your point across. I feel the same way.
    December 14th, 2009 at 07:19pm
  • fun ghoul fez.

    fun ghoul fez. (100)

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    Even though this was short, this was really good. You did a very good job of bringing across to us, the reader, how you feel and it was beautifully worded. The banner is also perfect for the story as well. :)
    December 13th, 2009 at 07:23am
  • folie a dru.

    folie a dru. (1270)

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    True.
    December 13th, 2009 at 06:43am