He Caught My Eye - Comments

Good Lord... I don't like this chapter very much either, especially how Simon wasn't being very careful when throwing Naomi around... I mean, it's not like they were a couple or anything, she wasn't cheating on him...

daaaaaayuuumm.....Jace must have fists of fury or something!

The locket is so pretty!!!

Loved the update! Can't wait for the next!

i just finished reading.. it's really good!! =D
I'm from Malaysia and i've never known a writer from Singapore.. so unique...haha.. ignore me... ^_^

I really like the banners you post at d beginning of each chapter... they're really beautiful.. @_@

Oh my gooodnesss !! I looooove iiitt !! I was like , "OH MY GOD . NO WAY ." IN EVERY CHAPTER . LOL . upload ? YAY ! i love you (;

wooh ^^

Jace. -.- Lol.

Finally! Gosh, took fricken' forever!
:)
I'm kidding, but yeah.
I'm sad for Simon, but more happy for Naomi and Chase, so....
~Chelsea~

BBvBM: LOL. -cough cough-

Everyone else: Lol. Simon's a very nice guy. ): Ahaha.

i love it and Jace and Naomi are perfect Simon should suck it up and deal

simmons such a nice guy, sucks for him.
great updateo.

Post script:
TEAM JACE.

"If you were wondering, Jace and Naomi would have never done the deed even if Kacey hadn't interrupted. Remember what Nic had said?"
Hallelujah.
FINALLY.
You're an amazing writer.
Oh, wow.
Thank goodness.
Loved it.
I'm so elated right now.
"Sex is like a work of art. You can't rush art and you can't rush sex." -Dan Humphrey
That's all I gotta say.

Thank you! ^^

All of you made my day. <3

I found this story last night, and just finished it right now.
I'm in love with it. You are an amazing writer. Everything that Naomi was feeling, I could sense the feelings, and everything.

Magnificent. Truly magnificent.

I feel tons loads of sadness for Simon. I mean he really likes her hopefully he can find someone better. I probably just feel bad for him since she lied and he came to take care of her even though he should be the one resting.

And yeah they kissed, I died when his sister walked in it was too funny and adorable.

Oh yeah, am I the only one who thinks Jace having the picture on his wall so he can see it every night when he's in bed a bit creepy-stalkerish in some kinda cute way.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Must every AMAZING story I read Must have a cliffhanger????? O_O ^_^

I started laughing so hard when Kacey walked in on them. That was just funny, and then his dad sees him kiss her, also funny. Of course I like the bit when his dad sees her and goes, "Konichiwa!' and keeps trying. I like his family.

And I'm feeling happy and sad. Pauvre Simon.

ouchhh poor simon..
bahah about jace's mum that was funny and his sister
this book is awesome keep updating :)

I feel happy for Jace & Naomi , I'm not sad for Simon because things happen for a reason , maybe Naomi isn't the one for him (visa-versa for simon) :) So yeah. Please update really soon , lovin every chapter you post

:D! SO excited they finally kissed!
but SO sad for Simon! Poor guy, he needs some love. D: lol