Sickness - Comments

i just read this over again and i bawl through out the whole thing. I love it. Its brought out a lot of emotion in me. Its an amazing piece of writing

wow .. i cryed. congrats x

Wow. thats all I can say is Wow. I cryed. Its beautiful.. Its amazing. Wow. I have never read anything like this before in my life. Its amazing. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. again thats all I can say. It left me almost speechless

That is actually one of the most moving pieces of writing I've ever read.
It actually made me cry.

I don't even feel the need to read the sequel.

I can't really say anything else.

you made me cry you ass. ;)
I loved it. It was fast paced, but yet you seemed to capture the genuine theamatics and beautiful description.

I honestly haven't read anything so well written. :) It could be a short novel. Excellente! :D I shall definitely read the sequel, but I'm on pills so I'm about to pass out in a few minutes.

Aww thats really cute! Very sad but cute! I love it!

Hey
Amazing story! Absolutely love it! I' will read your next story.

This is an awesome story. I know how it feels to be a different color. I've been an outcast since I started my new school two years ago. I actually cried reading this. It's awesome. :D

Ahhhhh
eff, I'm crying >.>

& I like Never Cry...

Amazing. Thankyou (:

...Still crying...

Wow. That was amazing.
It actually made me cry.
I agree with the others who said you should get it published.
Thank you for giving us such a beautiful story to read.

there I got a couple of people to look at it and still working at it. Arent u proud?

Your story is beautiful. I swear I cried all the way through the last two chapters.
You should get this published. But be careful no one steals it while it's posted.

Wow
I loved it
It was full of meaning
and I really wish you the best of luck for it to get published!!!!

This is so good. :shock:
It's so sad, full of passion.
It has brought tears to my eyes, a hard thing to do.

You really need to get this published. Anywhere.

xoxo
Yours cruelly
-Lauren

I am crying now. OMG!! I cant belive how good you are. I just cant believe. it. Why did Rose have to die?

I am speechless... and really like you work. You should be an writer when you decide to get a job. I think thats your true calling!

This story. Your writing. Incredibly fantastic.
Tears are streaming down my face, and soaking my shirt.
And, as d o r k;; x said You knw you have a wonderful story when your words make the readers cry.

I don't know what to say right now, except anyone who reads this should be ashamed if they don't comment. That was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read, on here or even in a published book. I just want to thank you for writing this. It certainly made me smile and nearly moved me to tears.

And you know you have a wonderful story when your words make the readers cry :)

wow.

What else can i say?

wow.

That was one of the most moving peices of writing I have ever read. I am so close to crying right now that you would not believe it. You have GOT to send this to someone. A publisher, someone who does short story illustrations, but you have GOT TO GET IT OUT THERE. You are with out a doubt the most talented writer I have read on Mibba and any of the other numerous fanfiction sites i go on, please, for my sake and yours, get it published.

Once again the tears are falling from my eyes simply from reading your story.
It is magnificent, one of the most beautiful things I have ever read.
You need to pursue a career in writing, because this story is without a doubt the best thing I have ever read.
You are so talented, and I am anxiously awaiting more.

Did you know this story is beautiful?
Did you know this story has the power to make people cry?
It made me cry.
It's amazing, you have a plethora of talent inside you.
Wow, it was....you left me speechless. I can't wait for more.