I’m sorry this is so far after the deadline for the contest, I’m getting these entries done as soon as possible. My apologies for this taking so long. (: Anyway, onto the story…
I liked how you put this into the point of view of both the daughter and the father. But I don’t like varying point of views, and this story varied a lot in point of views. But still, I can over look that since I liked how you were able to make both point of views work so well.
Your story was really well written, I liked reading it. And I liked the direction you took it. You did really well on it. I think this has been one of the best entries I’ve read so far, good job.
I liked how you put this into the point of view of both the daughter and the father. But I don’t like varying point of views, and this story varied a lot in point of views. But still, I can over look that since I liked how you were able to make both point of views work so well.
Your story was really well written, I liked reading it. And I liked the direction you took it. You did really well on it. I think this has been one of the best entries I’ve read so far, good job.