Execution - Comments

Wow. This was pure brilliant-ness. I was sucked in from the prologue, intrigued, then after I started reading the first few chapters, I couldn't stop. I wanted to know what happened. I was so shocked by the ending, not because of what happened, but because the story was just that good. And this story is so unique, I've never seen anything like it. I think everything was perfect. Really great. If we could rate things on here, I'd give you a 100%.

That...*clears throat*...made me speechless.
I must say, that was between the most saddest to the most brilliant story about execution.
I very much enjoyed it.
The description - you could picture the details perfectly.
The originality - very impressive.
All in all, excellent job.
Thank you for entering my contest, too.

Really good, i was thinking of entering but...lets just say i already know whos winning ;)

I actually rather enjoyed this. I thought it was very well written, and the plot was well thought out. The one thing I did have a problem with was the main character's testimony - she'd have more feeling when reciting all these events. The pain of memory, and even just being watched and judged like that would definitely cause some tears, and quite possibly stuttering and such.

All in all, well done.

this is a really great story you for sure will win!=)
update soon^^

wow. I really like this. I can't believe it doesn't have any more comments! you'll definitely win the contest! can't wait for the next update, and good luck!