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  • run.with.the.wind

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    this is a really good story its just a shame i can't get into it cause they is only 11 chapters i think you have a lot of talent in writing you just have to update more xoxo
    June 6th, 2011 at 08:26pm
  • NaiveDove

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    finally. i love this its interesting.
    December 7th, 2010 at 12:38pm
  • NaiveDove

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    this is really good!!!!! plz post more
    June 20th, 2010 at 02:37am
  • akinohi

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    so for chapter 11 i really like this part "The fear told me one thing; I can not be helplessā€¦ I will not bow; I will not breakā€¦ ever again." it really stood out
    April 22nd, 2010 at 06:38pm
  • akinohi

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    wow... i like it a LOT it's really good =) i'm gonna try to read as much of it as i can today
    April 22nd, 2010 at 06:18pm
  • Beautiful -Disaster-

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    :O that ..was..........awesome. :D mwahahahahah! plenty of violence...I do think I'm slightly sadistical...*shudder*

    YOURE MEAN! making me pick a favorite part . Hm. I loved every single syllable of it :D
    April 14th, 2010 at 04:52am
  • akinohi

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    i really like it! all the imagery is awesome =D plus the plot is original. always a good thing
    April 14th, 2010 at 03:24am
  • akinohi

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    it's good so far! i mean im only on chapter two but i like you're writing style! =D
    April 13th, 2010 at 03:10am
  • Infinitely

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    Wow. This story is good. I subscribed. I'm terribly sorry about your lost.
    April 8th, 2010 at 04:20am
  • I'm.Not.Insane.

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    Sorry about your Mum...
    Great Update though!
    The story is coming along great.
    =]
    April 8th, 2010 at 03:57am
  • Beautiful -Disaster-

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    The end was cheesy but it fit in so well =] I loved the chapter, beautifully written..if pain and abuse can be beautiful..ohwait.. IT CAN! xD
    April 8th, 2010 at 03:52am
  • NamelessHomosapien

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    I had to read this after seeing the tittle. It is a great story, by the way!
    April 8th, 2010 at 03:49am
  • HankieHead

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    that was AWESOME!!! sorry i havnt commented but we are moving states and i can only have the mobile broadband, which means i have to go outside when im on my computer...so yea, wouldve commented sooner, but you know...anyways, please update soon cause i cant wait to read more ;D
    March 24th, 2010 at 10:42am
  • I'm.Not.Insane.

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    Man that guy needs to go to an insane asylum...
    I really like how you write them.
    Great update.
    =]
    March 24th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • Beautiful -Disaster-

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    hehehehe :D viooolence in the next chapter i sense?

    he's not eeky at all 0_o he's....interesting..I like his character...hmmm :)

    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 24th, 2010 at 12:41am
  • I'm.Not.Insane.

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    Holy shit!
    What a freak...
    I hope she will be okay.
    And man what a cliffhanger... It just makes you want more.
    =D
    March 23rd, 2010 at 11:58pm
  • Beautiful -Disaster-

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    :O what is he going to do! OMG please update noooowww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 23rd, 2010 at 11:21pm
  • heyitstori

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    This is amazing. Please update!!! :)
    March 14th, 2010 at 02:03am
  • thesecondsuperchick

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    that is just as good as one black wish, and one black wish is awsome!! pls update!!!!!
    March 13th, 2010 at 02:44am
  • heyitstori

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    this is really great ( :
    March 7th, 2010 at 10:20pm