this is a really good story its just a shame i can't get into it cause they is only 11 chapters i think you have a lot of talent in writing you just have to update more xoxo
so for chapter 11 i really like this part "The fear told me one thing; I can not be helplessā¦ I will not bow; I will not breakā¦ ever again." it really stood out
that was AWESOME!!! sorry i havnt commented but we are moving states and i can only have the mobile broadband, which means i have to go outside when im on my computer...so yea, wouldve commented sooner, but you know...anyways, please update soon cause i cant wait to read more ;D