You'll Die for Your Sins - Comments

That was well-written and full of emotion. Most of it seemed very realistic. The only part that didn't really was the ending, but still, that ending was poignant and perfect. It's haunting.

WOW

that is unbelieable, i love it, so cleaverly written......

WOW.......

I AM SO MAD AT YOU BONNIE. I AM HALFWAY THROUGH. I THINK IT ALL JUST CONNECTED. IF YOU KILLED FRANK I WILL COME AFTER YOU IN A FIERY WAVE OF HATRED, TEARS, AND RAGE. FRANK IS MY MOST FAVORITE CHARACTER IN THE WORLD! D: -cries- I'm not actually going to come after you, but I might just cry. I hate it when Frank dies. Do whatever to Gerard, just... Not Frank. =/ ...

So... it seems Mikey is the older one this time. XD It took me a minute to catch this, but I eventually did ^^. .... I am going to punch Mikey in the groin for doing that to Frank. You have no idea how much this seriously upsets me. Frank is my all time favorite character ever. Stupid Mikey. -pouts- I hate him at this. I'm glad Gerard is pissed at him, Mikey deserves it. Nothing gives him the excuse to murder someone.

I want to marry Gerard for killing Mikey. I know must sound crazy, but still.

Well written. One question; why do you keep referring to Gerard as Mikey's "little brother"?
Gerard is the older one..

Well written. One question; why do you keep referring to Gerard as Mikey's "little brother"?
Gerard is the older one..

damn.....that was good....
scarily good