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  • talk.is.cheap

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    I'm months late, but I stumbled upon Serenading Sirens when I was trying to find a fix for my fanfiction addiction and realized you were Cinematic Sunset one of my favorite writers when I first joined Mibba almost three years ago. I missed your writing style, it's such a breath of fresh air and I loved how everything could be seen in Clarke's eyes and how you didn't need the chapter to be complete dialogue to get the story going.

    I can't wait to peruse the Jack story next and I find it hard to believe this story hasn't received much recognition. This is some QUALITY stuff right here compared to the shit some of the users here pull out of their ass.
    January 19th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    October 18th, 2010 at 11:43am
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    oh so amazing
    October 18th, 2010 at 02:30am
  • Akayytoremember

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    I'm soooo sadddd that this is over.
    I loved being in Clarke's world through the two stories
    But you ended it so well, tying up all the loose ends and I thought it was so cute that it had been a year since the storie had started with the VMAs
    :)
    October 18th, 2010 at 01:50am
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    love the update :D
    October 11th, 2010 at 04:28pm
  • Akayytoremember

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    I really enjoyed this chapter. I thought at first that it would be sad and depressing with the boys leaving but once again you surprised me :)
    Hadley and Clarke's scene was adorable (especially the last bit that was so sweet i think I've acquired diabetes lol) and it was nice to see them have a bestfriend moment again.
    October 11th, 2010 at 05:06am
  • username123456

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    This chapter was soo cute! I'm glad Clarke is being strong and staying happy even with Alex gone. I thought it was really cute when she just didn't want to let them go. I honestly even laughed out loud when Alex said he was bitching at Jack because he thought Jack was stealing his shirts, lol.

    I'm soooo sad to see this story go soon but I'm very excited to read this Jack story! Very, very excited! Anyways, I can't wait for the next update!
    October 11th, 2010 at 05:02am
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    i love how adorable they all are
    October 11th, 2010 at 04:47am
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    love the update :D
    October 4th, 2010 at 09:09pm
  • Akayytoremember

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    uh Dexter? YESSS.
    A girl after my own heart; all time low love and some dexter loving.
    hahahah
    Anyway as for the chapter, I really loved the fluff and cutesy stuff with Clarke and Alex. As per usual and I'm currious to see whats to happen next
    October 4th, 2010 at 02:31am
  • MusicKillsThePain

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    so this is almost over?!?!? nooooooooo!!!!!!!
    This is probably one of my favorite stories on here.
    You are such a talented writer!!!(:
    September 27th, 2010 at 11:09pm
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    love the update :D
    September 27th, 2010 at 06:27pm
  • Akayytoremember

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    I am like in love with this chapter. The argument had such raw emotions and ended up being worth it as the two hashed things out and made up yay
    September 27th, 2010 at 05:37am
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    aw only two chapters left?
    oh, the story couldn't get even more perfect:)
    September 27th, 2010 at 05:28am
  • username123456

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    Awwww! That was really neccessary! I loved how they went from yelling at each other to talking to each other. It seemed soooo real and I loved Clarke's change of mood and wanting to finally change her habits. I just love how this all fits and how real it is because it's a known fact that we change with the people that we're with, they have an effect on us, good or bad. And Alex definitely had a good effect on Clarke.

    So are there only two more chapters left in this story???? No!!! I love this story sooo much! I really don't want it to end, but I love how Clarke and Alex are when they're perfect that I don't think I could endure another story where theres drama between them. It might, quite possibly break my heart. I'm gonna be sad to see this go, but if it's a happy ending I will be happy.

    So with that said, I can't wait for the next update!
    September 27th, 2010 at 03:14am
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    love the update :D
    September 20th, 2010 at 05:39pm
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    She's not pregnant! I just breathed out this huge sigh of relief when she found out it was negative! But I'm sorta glad that this brought them together as opposed to them talking it out any other way. I'll be honest, that wasn't how I was expecting Alex to react but I'm so glad that is how he reacted. I hate that she left though :(
    Lmao, I love Jack's reaction, it was hilarious! if the kids don't believe, make them believe. that's fucking hilarious! I don't even have a twitter and I read that on Jack's! I burst out laughing, it was just hilarious. Agreed though, I don't believe in Jalex, but I think it's hilarious when the boys talk about each other like that. Anyways, I can't wait for the next update!
    September 20th, 2010 at 03:17am
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    She's not pregnant! I just breathed out this huge sigh of relief when she found out it was negative! But I'm sorta glad that this brought them together as opposed to them talking it out any other way. I'll be honest, that wasn't how I was expecting Alex to react but I'm so glad that is how he reacted. I hate that she left though :(
    Lmao, I love Jack's reaction, it was hilarious! if the kids don't believe, make them believe. that's fucking hilarious! I don't even have a twitter and I read that on Jack's! I burst out laughing, it was just hilarious. Agreed though, I don't believe in Jalex, but I think it's hilarious when the boys talk about each other like that. Anyways, I can't wait for the next update!
    September 20th, 2010 at 03:17am
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    ahh ok, she's not pregant then
    I've been worried about that all week ahah
    September 20th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • MusicKillsThePain

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    OMFG SHES PREGNANT ISNT SHE????? oh shiiit!
    come on Alex, how come you just got up and left?? You two are meant to be!♥
    love this story!(:
    September 13th, 2010 at 09:25pm