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  • MiniMCR

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    update! this is awesome!
    i love the layout,
    and the concept.
    cuz there's no drugs. yet.
    i hate how all max/ronnie slashes are all about drugs and
    tragedy.
    so update SOON!
    July 28th, 2010 at 12:12pm
  • My Chemical Tardis

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    Ilikeit! More?
    March 10th, 2010 at 09:27pm
  • Creepin'

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    Craig's a dick XD back to reading
    December 17th, 2009 at 01:28am
  • Mona_Lisa

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    awww the ending was so adorable. :)
    December 17th, 2009 at 01:16am
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    :O craigs being a little douche.
    December 16th, 2009 at 11:36pm
  • Mona_Lisa

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    I loveth this story, it is, brilliant. i'm likin this stephen dude
    December 16th, 2009 at 04:50am
  • bmth_007

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    hahah yay! :D
    December 16th, 2009 at 03:04am
  • Creepin'

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    YOU WERE FUCKIN RIGHT!!!!!
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWW
    December 16th, 2009 at 02:42am
  • Creepin'

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    ..AWWWWWEEEEE...
    *squeels* its adorable(:
    December 16th, 2009 at 02:34am
  • bmth_007

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    :D I really like this story!
    More soon?
    December 16th, 2009 at 02:33am
  • Creepin'

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    AHh!
    December 16th, 2009 at 02:29am
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    i like this stephen dude
    he speaks tha truth XD
    December 16th, 2009 at 02:23am
  • Creepin'

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    ^^^ wow thats alot xD and WOW i love the signature xD
    anywho
    AWWWEEEE! xD loved it
    December 16th, 2009 at 01:56am
  • Mona_Lisa

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    I like it and the only advice I can off you is to fix the incorrect capitalization and incorrect spelling of irrelevant in the title as it reads "These Situations are irrelevent now" and it, properly punctuated and spelled, would read "These Situations, Are Irrelevant Now" but would also be acceptable as "These Situations Are Irrelevant Now" because as an author you have to make the desicion to change the title to either add the break provided by the comma, and punctuate/capitalize is correctly, and as you are an author, and as an author myself, the only other suggestion I could make to you is if you wanted to make this a series type story you could write it as "These Situations: Are Irrelevant Now" and then you could make a sequel to this story as "These Situations: (and then add the new title here)" I am enjoying your story and hope to see more of it soon.
    December 16th, 2009 at 01:53am
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