SYD!!!!! i literally just cried in front of my grandma!!! that was so depressing it made my heart feel rechid..... ur such a great writer to be able to twist someone's emotions into the story as if that was the love of their life their dream and their comfort that just died. ouch... keep up the writing but next time tell me if someone is going to die ahead of time so i don't read it in front of my gma she thinks I'm luny (and thats quoting her)