I really really like this story, and I wanna find out WHYYYYY she left, and moved to Forks! (or La Push...I'm pretty sure she lives in Forks though :S)
Well since I commented on He calls me Lady, i thought I should be commenting on this one if I want you to update soon ; ) So, I am. And I gotta say, I'm liking the other Paul story alot better, then this once. But I'm hopefullying your this continue this, and the other one on the wolf pack.
By the way, I loved all your short stories. Thought they were really great. Haven't gotten around to reading your Slash story or the Jackb Blacks ones, but I'll make a note to get around to that.