Falling for the Enemy - Comments

  • rianaqua

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    When i looked at the short description i was like, "No, it can't be"

    -The picture made me laugh,
    -“If you leave, I’ll kill myself, and I’ll be successful this time.” <-- that made me roll my eyes at it's truth.

    Funny, amazing story.
    April 29th, 2011 at 02:54am
  • florence

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    This had me smiling the whole time, and bursting out laughing at the end.
    It was great. XD
    May 7th, 2010 at 01:20am
  • reid.

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    XD That was AMAZING! First Edward/Jacob I've read, but it was awesome!!
    May 4th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • Teenage Dirtbag.

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    I'm not sure if it was supposed to...but this made me giggle. tehe
    March 2nd, 2010 at 10:52pm
  • Tati.the.Strange

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    Haha. You should like add more to this!! Haha. I would you if you did....

    ~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)
    January 16th, 2010 at 09:14am
  • Tati.the.Strange

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    Haha. To me this was actually kinda funny. = D I don't know why but it was. Write a slash with Jacob and Edward!!!! I would soo read it!!! = D haha. guy slashes are funny... well, in a way... i think...

    ~Skittlez~ (x's,o's)
    December 29th, 2009 at 10:20pm
  • coolcat2003

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    omg you have to update plz i love this story it funny as crap mani was lmaf
    December 24th, 2009 at 09:43am
  • poisongirl24

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    I command thee to turn this into a full on chaptered story! You should totally write a slash between the actors or just between Jacob and Edward.
    December 21st, 2009 at 07:59pm
  • solovely;

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    Bahaha. wow. I could not see this happening; in the sense of it happening in real life.

    But bahaha, it was great. It made me laugh. (:
    December 19th, 2009 at 01:26am
  • courier six

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    *dies* I'm anti-twilight, but I would so read something like this.
    Very very nice. :)
    December 18th, 2009 at 05:46am
  • cthulu sleeps.

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    I LOVED THAT!
    I always imagined them together. They were both too good for Bella so, why not?

    ...An actual slash of them? I'd read that. Definately.
    December 18th, 2009 at 05:33am
  • the apex predator;;

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    Bahahaha, that was great. I think it's best left as a oneshot. Priceless.

    You made my night xD
    December 18th, 2009 at 05:01am
  • Cruciatus

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    Lmao!! The ending was funny Bella is all like "Oh my god..."
    December 18th, 2009 at 04:36am
  • taffy1011

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    I would definitely read this if u turned it into a story
    December 18th, 2009 at 12:02am
  • swell

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    I'm not usually a slash reader, but this was entertaining to read. :)
    December 16th, 2009 at 09:04am
  • the comedy of errors

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    I actually like the idea of this. Very different. You should definitely turn it into a story. :)
    December 16th, 2009 at 08:42am
  • Katiethebeat

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    I liked it I think you could continue it :)
    December 16th, 2009 at 08:06am
  • dirtylittlerocker29

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    OMG
    that was
    crazy
    lol
    wow
    haha
    December 16th, 2009 at 07:53am
  • fictionkitten

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    This was pretty good! I loved how Bella walked in on them... That was priceless! XD
    December 16th, 2009 at 07:34am