January 31st, 2010 at 02:19am
Whoaa. That was powerful! There were a few flaws, like Jack said it was barely 3 am when Alex left, and then Alex said the club was bound to be shut at 8 am.
It was fantastic, how you described the pain so well, and how the pain was the only way to remember her. You captured the song so well, and the ending almost made me cry! :'D
I could see the whole story unfold in my head. Very, very good.