Kiss & Tell - Comments

hell yeah, get it girl haha
wasn't expecting that, what a douche!
but it's a great opening for the sequal.
so subbing to that.
can't wait :)

I really did like this, the ending was fantastic.
Can't wait for the sequel :)
xo

Whoa. Surprising, but I kinda liked it. Haha

Well, well, well. Apparently, John hasn't changed from his douchebag ways. Just when I thought there was hope! Lol. The ending, though, really got to me. In a way, she's just running away from all her problems in Tempe. I wonder how Kennedy and the rest of the guys are going to take it. Well, I'm excited for the sequel! (:

Did John just really...?
And he told her he loved her, not long before the party.
What the hell John? ]:
There better be a sequel (;

<3

I couldn't help but laugh at "because I heard Eric's loudy mouth-breathing laughter " and I couldnt help but cry at the last chapter.

i say sequal.

and hey this chapter offended me a bit, i happen to own a mickey mouse towel and happen to think they are the shit thank you very much.

other than that this entire chapter was adorable. i would even say puppy level adorable it was that cute. looking forward to that sequal (;

I think it's safe to say that that was my favorite chapter. Her and John were so fucking cute. And I love John just rambling out his feelings and being unsure of himself. That's what love is after all, hahaa. Whichever one you choose, I'll love. Like Kelsi (catastrophe.) said, "as long as there's more John and Evan." Lol. (:

I just read this tonight. I absolutely love how their relationship went. And I love the subtle hints at The Maine lyrics(please tell me that I wasn't imagining that? Lol.)

I say do whatever you want, as long as there's more John and Evan.

I just read all 12 chapters and...WOAH.
I love the dialogue (: The insults thrown to John were funny, and how John hit on her was funnier xD
Oh gosh, how you wrote John when he wasn't pretending to be a jackass, he was such a sweetheart.
Seth's an ass...I hope Jared and Tim took good care of'em.
Ah God, the last scene? I was in SWOON CITY as cheesy as that sounds.
John rambling is the cutest thing ever.

I vote on a sequel (:
<3

half way i saw it coming.
what a fucking douche.

the part with john was super cute though.

I wanted to see Tim and Jared and John knock Seth's teeth out. He's seriously a fucking douche! However, the scene with Evan and John was so cute. I loved how they didn't have to say anything, but yet, they know exactly how each other feels. I can't wait for more! (:

god i finally caught up i had fallen so behind
and then when i read it i was like whoa

poor girl should have just accepted the fact that she's fallen for john
it's not like john wouldn't take her back with open arms.

and gah a broken hearted john breaks my heart
poor kid,
haha i love this story too much.
can't wait for the next one.

Hehehe, I probably look like such a creeper right now because I just commented on this, but whatever, it's an awesome story! :D Can't wait to find out what John meant about "being back to normal"... The suspense is killing me! (totally not trying to be a smart ass :D) Anyhoo, can't wait for more updates!!!

Seth is a douche. I really wish Kennedy or John or Tim would beat his face in. Lol. And as far as Evan and John are concerned, I feel so bad for her. I want them to just admit the truth, but at the same time, I love the irony of them not knowing. Lol. I can't wait for more! (:

I absolutely loved it! And well, to answer your question of "what do you want to see happen".... :D Well, this is just an idea BUT....here it is!!! Okay, so I'm thinking kinda have them leave on a bad note like how they are right now...(Okay, so then maybe end this story sort of soon, like in a few chapters.) THEN!!! Make a sequel where The Maine is on tour or something and they like meet back up and then some stuff happens (you don't want them to get together right away, right? I didn't think so! :D ) AND THEN (after some drama) they get together and live happily ever after!!!!! :D Haha, well, or something like that...but like I said: just a suggestion... :D Kay, bye!

I just started reading this story, but I'm in love with it! I love Evan's character! I'm seriously so sad her and John didn't admit their real feelings for each other. I hope she ends up going to John's graduation party and maybe something'll happen there! I can't wait for more! (:

hahah thanks! i'm really glad you like i was beginning to think no one was reading it :) but i'll try to update more!

really intresting so far! i like how the story is unfolding!
more please? hehehe sounds like oliver twist! haha
but serisouly, awesome job xp

thanks for commenting :)