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  • FuckNo

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    I know it's over but I just read this. My mind is totally blown. I wish you'd actually continued on this route and gone back and forth between the two worlds until there was some sort of 'conclusion' in both worlds, leaving the reader to decide which was the actual ending, but I did like this. However, I still think you should have kept going.
    May 13th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • BurnedOutPixels

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    THAT WAS BEYOND EPIC
    OMG YOU WROTE BETTER THEN I COULD'VE
    I LOVE YOU!
    March 29th, 2010 at 04:53am
  • Dame Chance

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    UNEXPECTEDLY AMAZING. MY MIND IS BLOWN.
    March 29th, 2010 at 04:30am
  • pizza shrapnel

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    Wow. That was...wow O.o Mindfuck. Awesome, but...unexpected.
    March 29th, 2010 at 03:24am
  • Dame Chance

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    she has the wish-to-be-somewere-and-you-will powers.
    why didnt she use them?
    March 10th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • Roisin

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    I liked it...the chapter I mean...I'm a little confused but Í'll figure it out :P
    March 9th, 2010 at 08:37am
  • pizza shrapnel

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    Aww D:
    poor Johnny.
    February 28th, 2010 at 11:51pm
  • Dame Chance

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    wtf?!?!?! how can she just leave them?!?! and poor johnny! you are correct! she IS a bitch! and i still dont like her, and she didnt even say goodbye to johnny it was the least she could do and then your ending the story soon meaning she probably wont see them again and i dont even like her parents and because i lacked putting grammar into most of this i hope it sounds like im yelling at you because in my head i am cause your making me sad and angry all at the same time so ARGG!!!
    February 28th, 2010 at 11:08pm
  • Dame Chance

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    yea...shiloh? shes pissing me off, to no avail.
    February 27th, 2010 at 04:29pm
  • BurnedOutPixels

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    Short but good.
    Very Good.
    Update soon.
    I update tmw
    February 27th, 2010 at 07:37am
  • Roisin

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    It just gets better and better =] update soon
    February 15th, 2010 at 05:48am
  • Dame Chance

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    ugh. shes pissing me off. alot. i dont know why. she just is, cause shes being stupid >_>
    February 15th, 2010 at 05:34am
  • pizza shrapnel

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    Well it definitely makes more sense when I read it all at once. :P
    Awesome update.
    February 15th, 2010 at 01:18am
  • BurnedOutPixels

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    Two Words.

    Oh Shit.

    Also can I kill my person's lover aka Zacky in the story right now?
    February 15th, 2010 at 12:45am
  • QueenProgrammer

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    i wonder if brian got back to everyone. and whos this little kid. and does that means shes stuck there too?? UPDATE!!!!
    February 10th, 2010 at 06:26am
  • Dame Chance

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    *whines and shakes computer* whyyyy? i wanna know what happens! and who the fuck is ellie? grah, you confuse me!
    February 10th, 2010 at 02:03am
  • voodoochild .

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    I loved it !
    <3333

    Oh Jeez, Who Is It ?!
    What Happened dd!??!!
    February 9th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • BurnedOutPixels

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    That was me! Oh Yeah. *dances* Oh Yeah.

    Oh yeah. You know I hate football. I ain't a cool texan like you! lol

    I LOVED IT! Especially the cute little puppy line! Mostly cause I call even the oldest dog/werewolf PUPPY!
    February 8th, 2010 at 12:56pm
  • Dame Chance

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    HOLYSHIT HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT!!! that was like, fucking straight out of a horror movie! who the fuck follows the voice?? UPDATE SOON, IM FREAKING CREEPED OUT!
    February 8th, 2010 at 05:02am
  • Dame Chance

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    wow...its such a twist to normal fanfics..! i love it!
    January 29th, 2010 at 03:49am