Second Sight - Comments

no friends, no lover.”

References, references... haha. :)

Ah, I was like, "Eight years already went by?!"

I'm actually glad you didn't use this for a sequel and kept it in here.

Sam is a hypocrite... I don't think I like her very much. After the way she expressed herself when talking about Brian and her sneering and instigations ... I just don't like her.
And the fact Ali has been with Chris all this time gets me even more. I would have dumped that fucker a long time ago. All those 'friends'

I know that Chris will just go back to his old violent ways as soon as he finds out Brian is back in the picture. Not only that, Ali will gain Sam as an enemy because of her new-found interest in Brian..... ohhhh, love triangle... actually love square because Chris will be there as well.

Surprise me.

Ha, loved... more, more, more. :)

~Wow, interesting dream she had. Kind of creepy... second sight. <333

Ah.... you are leaving me in suspense. I must have more of this story NOW!!!

It's my favourite one on here... more, please?

“I swallowed half my stash,” he said softly.

Love your use of Special K references. Pretty much favourite song everrr. ;)

Ah, he is so fucking bipolar. It gets me!!!

But then again his attitude inspires affection and makes you not want to be angry, you know?
Ah, loved this... I want more.

What's going to happen now?!

This story is engaging and refreshingly original. It's definitely a cut above 90% of the stories I try to read on here. It has an actual plot, a female character who is not a total lovesick loon, and you did a good job at making Brian really bipolar. It's funny sometimes the things he does or says, cause it's so not normal. I love the way even though she is 18, she's woman enough to give him a reality check. But I can understand if she doesn't want a relationship like that. Needy people scare me. I fear that nothing will ever be enough for them, because they haven't learned to love themselves and be okay alone yet. I kinda don't want someone else's entire mental wellbeing in my hands, cause hey, I'm a good person but I'm not perfect. And I have my own issues. So I can't wait to see how she's going to handle the relationship now.

truly amazing, not only for the original idea
but for the fact that it's Brian Molko...
I can't praise you enough for writing this :)

~AH!!!!

It happened!!!

SEX! haaa. ;)

And I really hope Ali can help get Brian out of his situation with the meds and depression.

Wonder what will happen from here on out, regarding her parents and so called friends. Those people are NOT worth her time.

Stefan, aw. Love him. <3

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

~Wow, grounded for a whole month.

I sense she will somehow find a way to escape a few times.

Possibly landing her into more trouble.

not to mention she is likely to find more of brian's hidden skeletons.

more, more, more.

~Wow.... that was interesting.

She saw the real Brian.

I am eager to find out what will go on from there.

Your descriptions, I just love them.

MOREEEE!

~Yes, I'm just extremely eager to find out the reason behind Brian's constant disguises and what is behind that facade.

I love this and I want MORE!

I really like it :D

~Ha, loved it. :)

You make Brian sound so damn cute and lovable.

Wonder what's going to happen when they go back to his place for a second time.... muahahaha.

More. :)

~COMPLETELY LOVED THIS!

I love the originality of this, ah.
Allison's friends are true jerks and after that, I wouldn't want to have anything to do with them.
So I hope she forgets about them.
Because what Brian said is very true... better no friends than people like that.

And it is indeed a long chapter, but I like long ones where many things happen.
Please tell me this is more than one chapter....!

I want to know why Brian doesn't want to be recognised.... ahhh.

Loved. :)