I'll Fill the Empty Pages of the Story of Your Life - Comments

  • KiwiJonasTwilightFan

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    Oh do update soon! :)
    I was wondering where this story had gone off to on my subscriptions page haha :) Looking forward to when the next chapter is up xo
    November 22nd, 2010 at 11:37am
  • taking.chances6136

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    Ooh I love this! Can't wait for Chapter Four :D x
    October 9th, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • False Masquerade.

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    please.please.please update?
    I'm so glad to see this back and the twist at the end there. Bravo Devi!
    Loved it =]
    update soon,? :D
    March 23rd, 2010 at 05:25pm
  • Confide.

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    Poor Charlie.
    I can't believe I haven't commented before.
    February 25th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • keepthislovealive

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    oh, tom. how i will slaughter you.
    poor charlie ):
    at least she has joe :D
    and hahahaha That was him! That was the tingly handshake guy! What was his name? Joe, yeah that was it. the tingly handshake guy!
    February 24th, 2010 at 05:35am
  • burningchances;

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    Awww Poor Charlie.
    Tom is such a dog, and I can't believe he took another girl to their table.
    I mean this story is so amazing and I love it.
    Joe is deff going to be her prince charming. (:
    February 24th, 2010 at 04:45am
  • JoBromance81208

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    I just read all of this today and it's sooo good!
    I love it!
    I can't believe Tom took another girl to their table! What a jerk!
    Update soon! :)
    February 23rd, 2010 at 11:52pm
  • alice liddell.

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    Tom is such a jerk :(
    Lovely update!
    Can't wait for more.
    February 22nd, 2010 at 08:49am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :) Aw, how could he do that? :( I felt bad for her when I read that. :( Still a good chapter though. Can't wait for the next one! :)
    February 22nd, 2010 at 02:44am
  • MindlessDreaming

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    Please update soon!!!!!! I REALLY love your story so far!
    February 22nd, 2010 at 02:24am
  • Twisted;;Symphony

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    ...........
    i'm speechless. what the- how could he- what is he- WHAT?!?!?!
    you need to update AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!
    this story is uhhh-mazing and there's only three chapters.
    February 22nd, 2010 at 01:47am
  • FlyWithMe;;

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    What a douchebag!(spelling?)
    Update soon please :)
    February 22nd, 2010 at 01:12am
  • Nanook

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    Hey. :) Just wanted to let you know that I'm reading this story and I love it so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! You're a great writer! :)
    January 21st, 2010 at 01:25am
  • keepthislovealive

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    I took his hand and almost immediately pulled away. A shock had run through my body when his hand touched mine. Even now it was still tingling. He looked at me oddly, before looking at his hand. Had it felt it too? Oh this was not good, I thought. I was with Tom. I shouldn’t be having hand shocking handshakes with other guys.
    haha i shouldn't be having hand shocking handshakes with other guys XD
    it's just so cute (: this is why she should be with joe, and not jerkface tom, yeah? :]
    January 18th, 2010 at 12:37am
  • alice liddell.

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    you've got a mistake at the end of the chapter.
    in the line:
    “Okay then,” he said, holding his hand out to me. “It was might meeting you.”
    just thought you should know if you didn't already

    great chapter though
    the chapter was so smile-worthy :)
    January 16th, 2010 at 07:21am
  • burningchances;

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    Awww I loved the hand shock!
    And why is their not many comments on this. I mean it's amazing.
    I'm about to comment it 400 times so you get all the comments you should be getting. (:
    Well Still I love this and it's amazing.
    January 16th, 2010 at 04:32am
  • PeaceOutDude123

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    I love it! Can't wait for more! =)
    January 16th, 2010 at 03:46am
  • keepthislovealive

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    ahhhhh i love this story (:
    and sigh tom is such a jerk :[
    December 26th, 2009 at 12:37am
  • WarDrums

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    hi, love the 1st chapter so far! great storyline too =)
    December 21st, 2009 at 08:04pm