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  • AlmostLovelyDisaster

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    This was really good I liked the end and it wasn't quite what i was expecting but it was very very good ^^
    May 3rd, 2010 at 02:20am
  • domious

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    It's finally ended! Man, I'm kinda sad, but I'm happy at the same time..ha. That night when Kevin came, why the fuck would he come in the first place? And tell Ebony she's cheating too..they were over..my god I hate Kevin, always did! I actually thought Daniel would have killed him..and about Daniel. He still kills? Damn..I didn't think he would after he found Ebony. And Ebony Preggo? So it does happen! Haha, man. Hey, that could give you an idea for a sequal. Their baby takes after Daniel or something! Maybe its a girl this time, and shes even more physco! Haha, yeah, well awesonme job!
    May 2nd, 2010 at 09:13pm
  • Ello Ashleyy.

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    Aww they're having a baby!
    The ending was amazing. It's sad that it's the end.
    I'm still curious as to how he got out and why he hasn't told anyone.
    This was such an amazing story.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 06:50pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    <3 I loved it although there still is the question of how he got out but meh dont care lol :) there happy i'm happy hehe ty hun it was awesome
    May 2nd, 2010 at 01:06pm
  • Airheart.101

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    Wow:] I have to say that was a fantastic ending to this story, one of the best I've ever read. You managed to keep each character true to themselves while not laying everything out on the table in the end.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 09:55am
  • JustAnotherFace23

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    I'm confused. How did Daniel get out of prison? And I don't understand why he no longer wants to kill Ebony because before he was arrested he still had that urge to kill her and than when he comes back he no longer has that desire anymore.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 09:22am
  • LeiLoSkye1412

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    Oh my gosh! I love how they're still together! This was such an awesome story. I really hope you decide to add more, but even if you don't, it was still wicked good!
    :)
    May 2nd, 2010 at 09:16am
  • Ello Ashleyy.

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    I love how Daniel is so protective and possesive of her.
    It shows he does have a heart even if it's just for her.
    Not good that he's going off to kill. He better not get caught again.
    Too bad he didn't get to beat Kevin up. Love this story!
    May 1st, 2010 at 08:11pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Oh no he can't get caught again :( she'll def be alone she needs him just like he needs her *sniffle*
    May 1st, 2010 at 05:35pm
  • Airheart.101

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    Damn]: Don't go killing someone.. She'll wake up alone:P
    May 1st, 2010 at 02:55pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Awwwww *cheers* Yays! I cried thats so freakin sweet. I <3 them together even if he is a little messededed up in the head :) ty for the update hun can't wait for the rest. :)
    April 30th, 2010 at 03:18pm
  • domious

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    Ah Ebony and Daniel back together. She could never trust Kevin from the begining, never felt confortable to let Kevin touch her. You kinda think she was the one to drive Kevin away right? But he was a waist of time, and it didn't seem like she cared much either when..DANIEL ARRIVED! :D

    Blah blah blah, they made love. Now theirs only two chapters left D: I'm really sad over this. I wanted more man! But Daniel found a girl he couldn't kill..I guess things had to happen soon..
    April 29th, 2010 at 04:00pm
  • Ello Ashleyy.

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    I can't believe this is almost over!
    Daniel is such a sweetie even though he's killed.
    Let's hope he doesn't hurt Ebony.
    I love this story, amazing update(:
    April 29th, 2010 at 03:04pm
  • he calls me darling.

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    I can't believe this is almost over.. :'( I really liked it because it was original and the characters emotions were just so raw and uncliched... (that's not a word. i made it up.)
    April 29th, 2010 at 01:46pm
  • factory girl

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    oh man this is so wrong but so right
    <3
    April 29th, 2010 at 12:54pm
  • Airheart.101

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    awww... 2 more chapters to go? Well I hope it's not completely a tradgedy then...
    April 29th, 2010 at 11:31am
  • domious

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    Wow, I actually thought Daniel was gotta take her or something when he came. But that didn't happen. You surprised me! Haha! Daniel just let her stay there. Then Ebony finds Kevin cheating on her?? Ouch, I was wondering what was going to happen when she got to Kevins place. I should have expected that, but I kept thinking "She's gotta find him dead..Kevin killed him I know it!" I guess thats just wha I want to happen..hehe.. I love that physcotic killer :)
    April 28th, 2010 at 05:36pm
  • PhoebenPaige

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    Poor Ebony, *sigh* Daniel and her need to just be together....lol
    April 28th, 2010 at 04:31pm
  • Ello Ashleyy.

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    Poor Ebony! Kevin is a jerk and doesn't deserve her.
    Daniel should beat him up now and take his Ebony!
    So sad this is coming to an end. I love this story!
    April 28th, 2010 at 03:05pm
  • he calls me darling.

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    Not to say Kevin's predictable, but I knew that was going to happen.
    April 28th, 2010 at 02:42pm