You and Me and the Devil Makes Three - Comments

@ CourageKeeper
hehe thank you darling! I hoped you would like it...glad you actually did...and commented of course! :))

So in love with this plot <3 absolutely great!

Amazing story! I loved it! It would be really awesome if you could write how they met though cause you hinted at it a few times and now I am dying of curiosity! :) Just a thought...

Awesome story. I loved it.
It took me literally all night/morning to read Just A Fling, and this one, but i eventually finished and i loved it so much...it was just amazing and i'm so sad that it's over.
I'm so glad that they ended up happy together though, all in love and what not. (: Oh, and i have to let you know that the sex scenes were fucking amazing. Haha, when I was reading it, i felt like i was actually there, experiencing it, and well heck! I wish i was there, cause i mean it's Oli Sykes! But yeah lol...you're a really good writer (:
And i must thank you, as you have made me get back into reading Oli Sykes stories <3
Anyways, i can't wait til you post the short story in Oli's POV.

Ah I love love love love it. Honestly, I love how their relationship grew, the character development was beautiful to read and this is definitely not one of those cliche story lines. It's unique and has this own little slot for your heart with its own amazing-ness. (I couldn't find the proper word to describe this story, so I used 'amazing-ness', since that covers it well enough. Hope you don't mind) <3

OMG! i can't believe it's over i think i'm going to cry! i lurved this story so much! i always looked forward to updates! i will so check out the short story, can't wait! thank you for making my day honey! <3

Ahhhhh I loved this story! Sooo happy that they ended up happy (: The ending was perfect, too. Ended it how they started :P You knooooow you COULD write another sequal if you want *hint hint* Hahaha. Anyway, thanks for keeping me entertained over the last few weeks. Your story was interesting, sexy, and adorable all at the same time (: Good luck with any other stories you write! If they're about Oli, I'll probably read them (:

where in the world am i going to get my daily dose of oliver from?! D: this story is over now. but at least that story in Oliver's point of view is coming soon! but i shall miss this story ): im glad that they got together in the end and it wasn't just like, "oh yeah you come live with me and come on tour." it was more real that they wouldnt be living together straight away and that they'd visit each other and stuff, that was lovely! ahh now she is on her period im sure oliver will get a lot of pleasure hahahaha, oh oliver. im going to miss this story! you're an amazing writer of course, its sad that its all over, but maybe in the future you can write another oliver story, you are obsessed after all :b

Ooh... I very much liked the last chapter XD

I don't want it to be over, but the ending chapter was certainly worth it. It showed the love that they have for each other - I mean, Oliver was making long-term plans! Not an every day thing, and she was accepting his plans and making the best out of what's to come.
I'm going to miss this story! After the short story in Oli's POV, I'm excited to see what you come up with next. :)

I can honestly say I'm about to cry.
Lisa was...and Oliver.
I don't even know.
That was all just too beautiful!

This chapter was the most emotionally written thing I've ever read. Not only on mibba but everywhere!

I was so lost into this. My mind was always 100% on it, when reading it.

Sorry this one is going to be so short! I just wanted to say one last thing.

I love how the ending basicaly says that they're about to have sex. Me saying this may come a cross as odd, but I don't care. I found it a bit amusing. It just made the ending all the more perfect. They're just so cute.

+ You take number one on my list of awesome writers.
But shush, don't tell!

*sniff* *sniff*
it's complete! *sniff* i'm gonna miss this story :]
it's so sad that it's over yet i'm still happy 'cuz it has a happy ending and Oliver made plans for both of them! Oliver!! haha.. i know i've already told you many times that i'm in love with Oliver's character but i can't stop myself from saying it., so imma say it again.. i'm in loooove with Oliver's character in your story!! :))
the way you write is just amazing!! you made them so real that even I could relate especially with Lisa.. i know how it feels to just hold back all your fears and keep your problems to yourself 'cuz you don't want to bother other people with your nonsense blabbering.. :[ just like what i'm doing now.. haha :)) but seriously though, it seems soo realistic that it makes me want to have my own Oliver.. one whom I could play games with.. hahahaha ;))
it's just soooo sweet.. Oliver did the research on Lisa's studies (where she'll take her master's degree) just so the two of them could be together and he shares the pain Lisa has because they are going to be apart.. that's just sooo romantic.! :')
and they're so sweet together.. i'm gonna miss the most their teasing and flirting with each other.. they're fooling around but what they feel for each other is obvious.. which is love :">
look at what love can do.. it all started with just a fling, but now they found the right one for each other :))
awwwweeee :"> i can't believe it's really over! :(
but thank you though for putting up a short story on Oliver's POV.. at least, we, your readers, know what's going inside Oliver's mind and we still have a glimpse on their future..
ohhhhh i hope, but though i know, that their future will be bright as the sun :))
it's really over! haha :)) still can't get over it! :)
but thank you! thank you! thank you!
i enjoyed reading Just a Fling and You and Me The Devil Makes Three! :)
you deserve an applause for putting up such entertaining story ;)
so i'm gonna give it to you!!
*applause* BRAVO! *applause* BRAVO
hahaha :))
thank you ms. Vanima-Arwen!!
hope to see you more on your upcoming stories! ;)
'till next time.. or see you on Undisclosed Desires ;))
later! :]

P.S. i love the ending :] who says two people who are deeply in love can't play games? :))

aww it soo sweet!!!! can u imageine them in 10 years time with mini lisa's and oli's running around covered in tattoos? lol....yes i have a weird brain...lol

aww i'm sad it's over :(
i really enjoyed it.. :D

I love, love, loved it!! It was soo good! They finally said they loved each other. :) It was soo sweet. I love it. I'm not ready for this story to end, but i guess i'll survive. :/

Awwwwww. YES! That was so sweet. I think that was probably my favorite chapter yet [:

and ooooh btw, i love the title chapter:
Chpater 19
It was just a fling before now, you’re the one
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sooo romantic! :))

awwwweeee :">
that was sooo sweet.. ms. author you're making me fall deeper with your story that i'm not sure what to do anymore when this story is gone :((
but it's alright! :) ahhh thank you thank you!! i really enjoyed chapter 19 that it is officially my most fave chapter!! i felt all giddy when they said their i love you's to one another.. awwwweee :"> that was sooo sweet :)
i love this! :)) i was like thinking while they were talking that when they go have sex Oliver should tell Lisa that he's not going to have sex with her instead he'll make love to her andddd surprisingly it appeared on the chapppp!! :)) awwwweee :"> i really do loooooove this!! :]
it's official! i soooo love this story and i love the author!! :))
thank you ms.Vanima-Arwen!! :)

Aw!

That was so cute and sweet.

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I do not want this story to end, at all.
I'm going to be upset when it does, because I look forward to the updates and smile when I see that they're there. :)