This is way behind... I'M way behind in this story, but I wanted to mention that I felt taken with this part that you wrote from chapter 6:
As the four sat around the table Gerard of course looked happy, he was smiling and listening to the conversation which was mostly between Alicia, Mikey, and Frank.
Inside of Gerard’s head was a completely different story.
He was a depressed person so most of the things were, why am I even here? They would be having a better time without me. I just hold them all back. I hold Frank back. What the fuck is my problem? Frank deserves someone special, someone happy. Someone who doesn’t just want to give up and end it.
The pure pessimistic thoughts that were swimming threw Gerard’s head were slowly weakening his smile and pulling him further and further from the conversation.
Oh man, The ending gave me tingles (: good tingles hahaha That was sweet, Frank in an 'out of body' not quite in a coma kinda like that film, whats it called, um, heaven? keep on heaven? Just like heaven, there we go Anyway yeah Frank, tell gerard who it was or else Lovedeth the update xo
Ka-BAM Damn, that gotta hurt when he knowck on the door With all the bloodied knuckles and all But, yes That was cute, in a, bloody kind of way hahaha When he ran to him, And kept on apologising Until he blacked out Because, his body knew that he could rest Because he was in a safe place In the arms of someone he loves Cute (: And Frank's coma p.o.v sounds pretty grand Loved the update xo
Aw, Frank WILL talk to Gerard about it Right? Cause, if he doesn't Shit gunna go dowwnnnnn man Ahhh, the drunken father, So what's gunna happen to Frank now? Run out, and run to Gerards? That'd be cute loved the update xo
ahhhh gee he doesnt hate you okay? and dont you dare say anything like that again :( i liked the chapter but i dont like how frankies said and how gees sad too :(
Ahhh, I was in confusion when I saw the update It's a good name for it And there's a storm coming One with big winds and downpours But then the rainbow will come out Right? RIght?! Anyway, Loved the update xo
awww mushy mushy!! i loved it (: frankies such a sweet little dude and gerard is awesome i loved the bit on the art table where frankie held his hand palm up so he and gee couuld hold hands that was just so sweet (: loved the update xo
As the four sat around the table Gerard of course looked happy, he was smiling and listening to the conversation which was mostly between Alicia, Mikey, and Frank.
Inside of Gerard’s head was a completely different story.
He was a depressed person so most of the things were, why am I even here? They would be having a better time without me. I just hold them all back. I hold Frank back. What the fuck is my problem? Frank deserves someone special, someone happy. Someone who doesn’t just want to give up and end it.
The pure pessimistic thoughts that were swimming threw Gerard’s head were slowly weakening his smile and pulling him further and further from the conversation.