I Can't Speak To You. - Comments

  • reader11224

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    Its so..sad! Im going to cry. But you did fantastic five minutes or not.
    May 13th, 2010 at 11:16pm
  • Of Course Not

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    I loved this. So much.
    It was amazing.

    (one thing, and I hate to ruin my comment this way, but I must tell you that towards the end one of them says "to no prevail" and it should be "to no avail")

    This was so gooood.
    March 20th, 2010 at 01:04pm
  • ghostbrainz.

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    Wow, this is really good.
    Even if it's only dialogue, it's really amazing.
    Great job with this. (:
    February 27th, 2010 at 06:21pm
  • Unicorns are Awesome

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    loved it
    January 30th, 2010 at 09:21pm
  • Ohh. It'sOnly Beccy.

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    awhhh!
    it was a pretty story, in a strange way. i liked it.
    December 19th, 2009 at 10:48pm
  • Drop Dead Malicious!

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    Aww. I loved it.
    December 19th, 2009 at 07:26pm
  • Sj Peltier

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    Cute story and the dialouge is a nice change. Very creative idea. The only problem with having so much dialogue is that your characters are kind of flat and the reading seemed hollow. But since it's such a easliy understandable idea people are familiar with the situation.

    I would have loved to see a good layout ^^
    December 19th, 2009 at 07:25pm
  • matthuee.

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    It was cute, it made me smile :]
    December 19th, 2009 at 07:06pm
  • Jazzi.All.Over

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    Oh it was way cute in a sad way. And I liked it. I could totally follow what was going on, but that's probably because I really just like reading dialouge. Ha I'm a total nerd. So yea. FIRST COMMENT WOOT!!
    =) ♥ +jazzi
    December 19th, 2009 at 06:56pm