Wow, I really like this. I think Lilly is a really cool character and I can't wait to read the rest of her story. Seriously, I want to know what else will happen on her trip back to her home town; will she get back with Caleb? Is she going to befriend Marilyn? What has happened since she's been gone from Mays Landing? Yeah, I'm superexcited to see where you're going with this. :D
I just subscribed to your story :] I read the first chapter, and I couldn't stop, even though my mom was yelling at me "Get off the computer!" Hah. Very nice story so far.