Tattered Strings and Tear-Stained Wings. - Comments

This story so far is amazing.
The only thing that I'm going to complain about is that in chapter two
While she is speaking to Jason, Layla 'purses her lips' quite often.
And then you said "she pursed her lips for the first time When
in fact she had done it maybe five times before that. Other than that
slight repetition I love it.
Please continue, and update soon! I'm curious to know what will happen
next.

Goodness, G. You really have update. The public demands it. I am going to harrass you until you updaTtteee.

i no im annoying, but please update.

r u gonna update soon or.....

i just started reading, and this story is really good! u should UPDATE!

Ackkkk! when's the ext update!!! lol

gosh, update!!!

I love the new layout and the banner thing.
Love that chapter it was kinda funny
I would've died from a heart attack after that. lol

My friend is pretty much forcing me to read this right now..BUT it's awesome so I don't really blame her!! She said I'd absolutely LOVE it, and I do!! I'm gonna subscribe as soon as I figure out how to. Update soo please!! (:

oh my gosh, this story is AMAZING! how is it only two stars?!! That's sooo messed up!! I'm gonna subscribe (: PLEASE update soon!!

Haha, " ..there were two that were open! And a door you could've walked out of! " that nearly knocked the socks off me, and Seth thought I was crazy cause he had no idea what I was laughing at. Funny!!!

I figured it out!

and yes, I absolutely love the new layout.

oh wow! i loves the new layout G!

I like how you write, its awesome. It incaptivates me.

i am helping you earn 3 stars, k? I like your story by the way?

Yes, tennis rackets are much funnier to break over people's heads.

I think it prtty damn flawesome as of now. I also think that the switching of the chapters and weapon worked well.
A tennis racket is way funnier!!

I like this. (:
And if you need to change and edit a chapter to make the story work I would go for it.
I had a story that was actually almost done, but then I couldn't work on it with how my guy character turned out and I had to delete and rewrite it all!

Oooh. I love fantasies.
The 'a tale of faeries and demons and monsters and lies' somehow magically drew my mouse to the subscription button. :D
I'm in. This sounds cool.

OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.... Pretty! Where'd u get the layout though? Did u make it? oh wellzers...