Losing Touch - Comments

they are so stinkin cute together
and alskjfla WHO'S IDEA WAS IT TO LET PAT GET CANDY?!

anywho...
I'm glad she's back with him and living real life for now :]
update soon, kiddo ^-^

I loved it! But I don't want bad things to happen to them :(
Update soon!

utoh. the ending makes me feel like bad things will unfold.
but the mall trip was cute and i love how at the beginning he was all worried about her going out.
it just shows how much he loves her and wants her around.
update soon!

I loved it! They had a pretty good mall trip! Lol. And as for the ending, I can only
Imagine what that means! ): & I'm sorry you've been going through a hard time. I hope things start to turn around! (:

Amazing chapter yet again :) John is the cutest of all! Update soon!

So . . . words fail me, right now. I loved that chapter, something fierce! Lol. John and Zoe are so . . . perfect? I can't find a better word than that, so that will have to do. The way they're so in sync with each other, of rather, John is so in sync with her. His reasonings for still staying with her and still loving her - gah. You're just fueling my love for this boy! Lol. Seriously, I just about teared up reading this chapter. And, both of those songs were perfect to stick in there, of course! Anndd, hahaa. John losing his virginity to all of us? What an interesting concept! (:

Awe. They're all back together again! I understand Why John's worries, but I just hope he doesn't so anything stupid like cheat on Zoe or something! Then I might have to hurt him! Hahaa. And all of those songs that you mentioned, I absolutely LOVE. They all inspire me as well! Lol. Since Sarah asked for Jared, could it be possible for me to have Pat? (:

ALFJADL
I AM SUCH A TERRIBLE COMMENTER
but then again, I haven't really read anything in a week because of school, so hopefully you'll forgive me??
I think it's so cute that she finally told him what was happening, he came back and they're like back to normal! they're gonna have to go through all the things that come with after surgery, but I'm stoked to see how they make it :]
and i'm sorry about your dad, kiddo. you're pretty brave to write a story kind of about it.

...erm... would it be too much for me to ask for Jared in this story? :D
I promise I'll try to read and comment more hahaha

oh and sorry to hear about your loss:( x

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! i love your story half to death!:) x

Wow. Well I'm really glad that John came to see her as quick as he did, along with everyone else. And I'm super glad that the majority of her tumors are gone. I just hope it stays that way and that the surgery goes good! As far as the layout goes, I LOVE IT! (:

And, I'm pretty sure you've heard this a lot, but still, I'm sorry that you had this happen to someone so close to you.

It's so good that she's getting better :) More soon!
PS Sorry to hear about your dad.

WOO She's getting better :D
(PS- I have Algebra 2 also :P)

nawwh this story is great and heartfelt i love it. and im sorry fr yr loss. xx

love it! and I dont know. let's pray to god that this isn't another preggo story

awe yay. glad theyre not getting divorced. i hope they interact face to face soon. update please!<3(:

I loooooveeee it! Update now!

Well I like this story heeeeaaaappppps! Hurry up and update :)

oh boyyy. shes gonna tell him. finally. cant wait to read the next chapter.

ahhh yes she told john =]