Where the Lines Overlap - Comments

Oh my god. That was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. Oh that was amazing.
I'm saying "oh" too much. sorry.
*cough*
Anywho. Yes, It was extremely well written, I loved the story so much, it wasn't cliched, which is nice. I loved the whole idea, the moving away to Paris for six months, the girlfriend, soon to be wife. excellent Idea,
I truly can't come up with any faults for it at all.
I loved how there was obvious a connection between them, which was on a higher level than a friendship.
I absolutely adored the ending of it, it was very different to what you expected. I liked the fact you didn't make the actual character too sad, like she's been thinking over it so much, she just knew theer was no option but to accept what happened.
I was so close to crying, but the fact that the character stayed fairly strong prevented me from getting there. Which is an extremely good thing, because it meant you expressed the characters feelings really well.
Will definitely re-read this sometime I enjoyed it that much. :)

this made me cry!
it was so sad but beautiful at the same time :(
great job.

Awwww. :'(

Cameron dropped his hand from my back and shuffled away from me. Now there was only our hands’ connecting the two of us.

i love that bit. i lingered on it for ages, just because i felt i had to.

well done, bekki!

I loved this! I loved your title, too! Paramore = probably one of the best bands ever.
Hahaha. Your writing is so great! Well done! :D

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it :D
as you knew i would :)

Merry Christmas, my lovely.
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