I Think I'm Falling for You - Comments

  • celestial_royalty

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    aww cuuute. I think I've read this before because I remember commenting on a lot of your stories but I decided to read it again. there are spelling errors but I liked the ending very much and it was (again) cuuuuute!
    March 15th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • Brunette Vengeance

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    This was a really good story and I enjoyed it a lot.
    The ending was really enjoyable and I think you could do like a sequel for Haleigh and Embry.
    That would be a good story to read and Paul's reaction to it.
    I hope you can think of another story that would just as enjoyable!
    September 14th, 2010 at 09:47pm
  • finnick.

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    Laugh out loud at chapter 29's Author's Note. I tapped into your muse (:
    When they were like Dylan left, and Leah's gone....I was like hell to the yes! Happiness lives.
    And woot woot GO PAUL! Damn bizznatch Lola, got what she deserved. That's what I call comeuppance!

    And the Epilogue. I'm going to cry. I'm so sad its over! Like terribly, but seriously I started laughing in hysterics at the fact about Embry imprinting on baby Haleigh! And especially when she called him Uncle Embry! I mean how weird of a transition will that be!?

    But seriously, thank goodness for imprinting, its like a real life fictional, set in stone, happily ever after.

    In closing, thanks for writing this story. I'm surely going to miss it. You'll have to let me know when your next big idea comes up (;
    September 14th, 2010 at 07:27am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    I'm really going to miss this : (

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    September 14th, 2010 at 01:29am
  • aprilm405

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    i loved it

    i can't wait to see what your next story is!!!! :D
    September 13th, 2010 at 05:47pm
  • Silhouette

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    I absolutely loved the first chapter. Jacob's reaction, Paul's reaction, to her arrival? Hilarious.

    My only issue- and it's a very, very minor one- is that I've always thought that the imprint only affects the werewolf. The other person doesn't feel it. They just... fall.

    You also switched between past and present tense quite a lot, and once used '3' instead of spelling it out.

    Oh, wait. And in chapter three Jake says that Bella led him on. I really have to disagree. She was admirably straightforward about her feelings toward him- he was just determined to change them, and later, to make her realize she loved him. But he knew all along that she was oblivious.

    And Paul, in chapter four, climbs up a tree to her room. In the movies, and I'm nearly positive, in the books, the Blacks lived in a one-story house.

    But would you believe me if I said I enjoyed it, despite all that? Because I absolutely did.
    September 13th, 2010 at 06:30am
  • mnyfrkls

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    Awesome ending, can't wait utill your next story! =)
    September 13th, 2010 at 06:14am
  • Mikey Whiskey Hands.

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    WAIT! :D
    There should be a sequal and Let it be about Haleigh and Embry! :D
    September 13th, 2010 at 04:29am
  • finnick.

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    I love this story so much....its sad to hear its going to be ending. I wish Dylan could just like imprint on Leah on his way out of La Push or something so that the revealing of their secret wouldn't be wasted....and that way theres someone for everyone, lol. Love all around!

    But can't wait for the last few chapters, and for Paul and Melanie to have their baby (:
    August 31st, 2010 at 04:01am
  • choirgirlx3

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    i loved it! can't wait to read what happens next =D
    August 30th, 2010 at 10:28pm
  • aprilm405

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    i loved it!!!!!!
    UPDATE SOON
    August 30th, 2010 at 02:00pm
  • xoxomusic363

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    Well that was sudden. But not saying I didn't see it coming :) Loved it :) :) :) :D:D:D:P:P:P
    August 30th, 2010 at 05:33am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    August 29th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • ashaby

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    love it! amazing! i dont want this story to end! its funny and cute! omg girl u write such good sex scenes! lol. :D
    August 29th, 2010 at 10:09pm
  • pottersgf18

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    love it and hope you come out with more soon
    August 28th, 2010 at 08:11am
  • Daydream Away;

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    Ughh, Cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!! I laughed when Dylan said he was going to put Paul in the hospital. Update sooon please?!
    August 22nd, 2010 at 10:24pm
  • choirgirlx3

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    I seriously cannot wait for more
    I hope you update again soon.
    August 22nd, 2010 at 09:58pm
  • aprilm405

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    UPDATE A.S.A.P
    August 22nd, 2010 at 05:12pm
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    August 22nd, 2010 at 06:38am
  • mnyfrkls

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    lol Paul is going to give Dlyan a beat down!
    (Awesome update!)
    August 22nd, 2010 at 05:01am